July 31, 2013

" Concrete Start (Part 2) "


SCENE 1:
Nighttime, Research Center.

[ Jeszyca wakes up suddenly from
what feels like a week-long nap.

Heading to the mirror, she checks
her forehead. ]

‘Nothing still.’


[ Now in the dark hall, she walks
toward the bathroom.  Hearing
loud voices, Jeszyca leans on
the door to listen. ]

FEMALE1: 250, 200…What should
we pay out this time?
FEMALE2: Who cares as long as
they get the same.  Can you believe
they increased it from $300 to 5?

[ She takes the notice off her desk
and slides it into the shredder. ]

FEMALE1: Yeah, too bad we’ll be
the only ones reaping the benefits.


Meanwhile, at The Telazon’s

[ Airynn opens his freezer & sees
Its full of ice cream, pizzas, and
various other frozen items. ]


SCENE 2:
In The Living Room. . .

[ Chais and Billy are sitting on the
couch tossing a football  back and
forth. ]

CHAIS: No more Connor MS!

[ He speaks through a mouthful
of mint chocolate chip. ]

BILLY:  Now you can spend the
summer following Jenni around
like you wanted.

[ Chais punches him in the arm.  ]

CHAIS: Yeah right dude.
Chais doesn’t chase.


Next morning, at Ace’s . . .

[ Ace is slowly walking through the
the living room, trying not to wake
anyone up. 

Finally inside his car, he checks his
voicemail. ]

‘Please come in to get your results.’

‘Message Erased.’


SCENE 3:
At Jeszyca & Larrie’s.

[ Jeszyca sits on the couch, staring at
the way too short check in her hand. ]

‘The nerve.’


[ Opening her laptop, she searches
her history to find the website where
she first saw the Research Ad.

Jeszyca is surprised to see a new
one had already been schedule for
the next day. ]

JESZYCA: We’ll see about that.

[ Her phone rings . . . ]

JESZYCA: Hey Larrie
LARRIE: I just got your text.  Wonder
how long they’ve been getting away
with this.
JESZYCA: I don’t know, but they won’t
be doing it any longer.
LARRIE: Don’t tell me you want to go
back there and investigate.  You know what
 happened the last time you stuck your nose in.

[ Jeszyca takes a second. ]

JESZYCA:  Yeah.  Maybe, you’re right.


SCENE 4:
Community Hospital, (Parking lot).

[ Ace is back in his car now.  His
appointment was done half an hour
ago, but still he sits frozen by what
the doctor just told him.

Dialing furiously, he waits for his
best friend to answer the line. ]

ACE: I’m so glad you answered.
MARK: Hey, what’s going on?
ACE: Look, I haven’t exactly been
honest with you or anyone in the
last few months…about what I’ve
been going through.

About a month ago, I noticed a
bump underneath my arm.
MARK: Okay, but you got it taken
care of, right?
ACE: No, not exactly.  I’ve just been
really caught up in the Salon.

But now it’s gotten worse.
MARK: How bad is it?

ACE: Mark, it’s serious.

The doctor told me today I
have a rare disease called
Castleman’s.


SCENE 5:
Late night, Outside the Research
Center.

[ A dark figure with a mask enters
the parking lot and slowly creeps
up to the side door of the building.

Looking around first before trying
to open the door. ]

‘Since when is this locked?’


[ Before getting an answer, a
series of bright lights are suddenly
shining onto the intruder. ]

“Its police! Put your hands in
the air.

And turn around slowly.”

[ The intruder obeys, waiting for
further instruction. ]

“Now remove the mask!”

[ The mask is removed, &
Jeszyca stands there in fear. ]


SCENE 6:
At Ace’s place.

[ Ace is wrapping up a phone
conversation with Mark. ]

ACE:  You promise to keep
your mouth closed.
MARK: I don’t agree with
what you’re doing, but at
least keep me informed.

Alright, man?
ACE: Okay, I have to go.

[ Ace hangs up, & meets
Karie on top of their bed. ]

KARIE: How’s Mark?
ACE: He’s good.  Enjoying
his extended vacation.

[ Karie gets closer to him. ]

KARIE: And how are you?
ACE: Better now.  Much
better.

[ They roll over in the bed. ]



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