June 7, 2013

" 1 Last Shop (Part 2) "

Kyle, Weis
SCENE 1: Later the same night…

[ Kyle walks up to a back door.
Showing the bouncer his ID,
he enters & finds a seat at
the bar. ]

“What kind of place is this?”

[ He wonders looking around
& seeing mainly women
waiting in the audience. ]

[A female bartender spots
Kyle sitting alone. ]

“Can I get you a drink?”

KYLE: Yes please.  A Corona.

[ She takes the top off &
hands it to him. ]

KYLE: Thanks.  My friend
asked me here.  I have
no idea why. 
BARTENDER: What’s his name?

KYLE: Marty, why?
BARTENDER: You really don’t know.
KYLE: Know what?

[ She smiles at him & walks
away. ]


[ Suddenly the room goes dark
except for a blue spotlight on
the stage. ]

“Ladies, put your hands
together for Party Marty!“

KYLE: Oh my god. 


SCENE 2: In Weis’ bedroom.

[ Joh walks in, sitting down
on the bed. ]

WEIS: I thought I said not
to wake me!  I’m still
totally freaked out
about last night.
JOH:  Well, I don’t think
Trey called the cops, if
that’s your concern.
How did he seem when
you walked away?

WEIS: I couldn’t bare to look.
His bragging pissed me
off to no end though.
JOH: Yeah, didn’t that happen
with Landyn also? I mean,
you broke up with him
pretty randomly over a
 fight, right?

WEIS: Okay, what does that
have to do with anything?
JOH: I’m just saying, you’re
almost eighteen.  Maybe
its time to man up and
apologize for once.

You’re not always right.

[ Joh leaves the room & Weis
buries himself underneath
the covers. ]


SCENE 3: At TA, In Mark’s office.

[ Mark is seated at the desk &
Hahn is standing facing him. ]

HAHN: So the commercial is
set to play on all screens
once an hour now.
MARK: That’s awesome.
Thanks bud. 

[ Mark is searching through
his desk drawer. ]

HAHN: Sure thing.  You
lose something?
MARK: Besides my mind.
Yeah, I can’t seem to
locate my spare store
keys. 

Hopefully they turn up
before the store shuts
down tonight for waxing.

[ Suddenly there’s a knock on
the door & Landyn enters. ]

MARK: Wow, you’re early.
For a change.

[ Landyn smiles. ]

LANDYN: Yeah, we should
go over what you want me
to say at the presentation.

HAHN: Cool. See you two later.


SCENE 4: At Kyle’s apartment.

[ Kyle is sitting on the couch
with Marty at the other end
counting his money.  ]

MARTY: 371, 372…Three
hundred seventy-three
dollars.
KYLE: In one night?
Screw you chico
I can’t even make that
in a week. 
MARTY: Well, you’re
in the wrong industry
my friend.
KYLE: Yeah, I see.

MARTY: Let’s go get food.

[ Marty starts to get up. ]

KYLE: Wait, a second. While
you we’re on stage I got
a strange invite from this
older woman.

[ Kyle hands him a note.
Marty reads it & smirks. ]

MARTY: Yeah, that was
my boss.  She wants you
to audition, I guess.

Hilarious, right?

[ Marty begins to laugh
& Kyle just stares at him. ]


SCENE 5: Back at Joh & Weis’. . .

[  Weis finally comes downstairs. ]

JOH: Hey, you had tons of mail.
Something from school came.

[ Weis sits down on the couch
& starts reading a letter. ]

“Dear Weis L Kardin, Although you
placed 2nd to the Valedictorian,
at 17 and nine months, you are
the youngest student to walk
at a MSCC graduation.”

JOH: That’s pretty cool.
WEIS: Yeah, I guess. Wait,
there’s more. . .
They want me to give
tomorrow’s speech!
JOH: See, you should really
check the box more often. 
WEIS: Trey’s ignoring me.
The last thing I wanna do
tonight is write a speech.
JOH: Then don’t. I invited
some people over.

[ They hear a car horn outside.

Soon Stuu & Tiesun have 
joined them in the living room. ]

JOH: So, you’re the girl from
the video?
TIESUN: That’s me.

STUU: So guess who got
Valedictorian.  This guy!

[ Weis looks away, Joh stays quiet. ]


SCENE 6: Still at Kyle's. . .

[ Marty is almost knocked out
when Kyle approaches him. ]

MARTY: Good shower?
KYLE: Yeah, I’ve had a lot of
time to think.
MARTY:  Passing out for work
soon?
KYLE: No, because I decided
I’m not going back.

[ Marty sits up in surprise. ]

MARTY: What are you talking
about loco?
KYLE: I’m barely paying bills.
I’ll never advance at TA.
That’s why I’m taking your
bosses offer.

[ Meanwhile, Larrie & Jeszyca
are in their living room talking. ]

JESZYCA: I can’t believe you we’re
tied up for three hours all for
some sex fantasy.
LARRIE: Hey, don’t hate.  Yeah,
I didn’t expect her to take it
that far.  But once we got 
going it turned out great.
Trust me, there was a very
happy ending.
JESZYCA: Gross!


SCENE 7: The next morning   
at MSCC Graduation.

[ The crowd applauds & Weis
exits the stage. As the crowd
dispearses, he sees a familiar
face. ]

WEIS: Hey, thanks for coming.
Didn’t think you noticed my
missed calls.

I’m sorry I lost my mind. 
I wish we could go back
to the way things we’re.

[ Trey hands him a paper. ]

WEIS: Is this your new number?
TREY: No, my aunt is a counselor.
I think you should give her a
call. It would be good for you.
WEIS: Wait, what? Hold on.

TREY: Goodbye Weis.


[ Across town, Jeszyca wakes
up to a knock on her door.
She sees Ski on the other 
side. ]


[ 5 minutes later she comes
back inside as Larrie comes
out of his room. ]

LARRIE: Who was that?
JESZYCA: That was Ski.
They found out about
everything.

And I’m fired. 

June 4, 2013

First Look. . ." 1 Last Shop (Pt. 2) "

Marty, Kyle
SCENE 1: Later the same night…

[ Kyle walks up to a back door.
Showing the bouncer his ID,
he enters & finds a seat at
the bar. ]

“What kind of place is this?”

[ He wonders looking around
& seeing mainly women
waiting in the audience. ]

[A female bartender spots
Kyle sitting alone. ]

“Can I get you a drink?”

KYLE: Yes please.  A Corona.

[ She takes the top off &
hands it to him. ]

KYLE: Thanks.  My friend
asked me here.  I have
no idea why. 
BARTENDER: Oh yeah. 
What’s his name?

KYLE: Marty, why?
BARTENDER: You really don’t know.
KYLE: Know what?

[ She smiles at him & walks
away. ]


[ Suddenly the room goes dark
except for a blue spotlight on
the stage. ]

“Ladies, put your hands
together for Party Marty!“

KYLE: Oh my god.  

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Kristyn, Joh, Tiesun