March 19, 2025

Strictly Exposed: Part 2 [ #Surprise25 ]

 

[ Mark & Ski’s Home . . .Sunday Morning. ]

 

[ Mark strolls leisurely past the living room,

noticing his new visitor rustling underneath

the comforter on the sofa, he calls to him. ]

 

[ Erme sits up slowly, opening his eyes

and letting out a long yawn. ]

 

“Hey, are you feeling any better?”

 

[ Mark sits down next to him. ]

 

ERME: You mean, have I gotten over

the fact that one of our horses died

and my parents are blaming me for it?

 

No, not at all. 

 

MARK: Sorry.  I can’t believe they just

kicked you out over speculation like

that. 

 

ERME: I know.  I appreciate you letting

me stay here.  Me and Yaz haven’t

been dating that long and I want to

give her space sometimes. 

 

MARK: It’s no problem, you can stay

here as long as you need to. 

 

“Hey, is anyone home?”

 

[ Erme looks at Mark as his face switches

from its morning stillness to sheer excite-

ment. ]

 

[ He retreats to the doorway, seeing Ski

standing there with his luggage.  They

hug and embrace. ]

 

MARK: Why didn’t you tell me you

we’re coming back today?

 

SKI: Because I wanted it to be a

surprise.  Duh! 

 

[ They hug again as Erme comes around

the corner. ]

 

 

MARK: Ski, this is Erme, a fellow TA.

 

Erme, this is Ski.  My long, lost partner.

 

SKI: Well, not anymore.  I’m back.

 

Nice to meet you.

 

[ Ski smiles, extending his hand out

to Erme. ]



[ Meanwhile. . . At Stuu & Tiesun’s. ]

 

[ In the kitchen, Stuu is scrolling on his

phone while his daughter Mila sits across

from him enjoying her cereal.

 

Tiesun joins them at the table. ]

 

TIESUN: Big night tonight. Are you ready

to see your ex perform on stage?

 

STUU: Not even remotely.  Can you believe

it’s been six years since me and Weis split

and I quit the band?

 

TIESUN: And now they are touring all

over the States without you. 

 

STUU: I know, but I’m fine.  Let’s talk

about something more interesting.  Like

your random date with this stranger.    

 

TIESUN: We’re not dating.  I just asked

him to the awards ceremony.  He’s kind

of a loner and I just want him to feel

welcome.

 

STUU: Awe, that’s nice of you.  And it

doesn’t help in any way that he is exactly

your type.   

 

TIESUN: And what’s that?

 

STUU: Come on, Airynn? Larrie?

 

It all checks out.

 


TIESUN: Of course. Why don’t you

ride with us if you’re so concerned

over my well-being?

 

STUU: That’s okay, I have a date.

 

She’s from Kutz.  I’ll introduce you

tonight.  And just to be sure, we’ve

already had the talk about my a-

sexuality. 

 

TIESUN: Great, that’s a good start. 

 

[ Later, Stuu is sitting in the living

room alone.

 

Looking over his feed, he sees a post

from fellow TA member Scott. ]

 

“Last minute outfit check for tonight.

 

Can’t wait to see Kira’s.”

 

[ Stuu’s sudden realization turns fast to

rage. ]

 

STUU: Every.  Single.  Time!

 

[ He states, tossing his phone down

in disappointment. ]



[ Early Eve. . . Back At Mark & Ski’s. ]

 

[ Monica & Kyle, Amber & Dyminic, Hithe &

Fang, Sunshine & Jeszyca are seated around

the dining table while Ski & Mark are across

from each other. ]

 

[ Mark sits down, drinking from his glass

of white wine. ]

 

“Thanks for letting me practice my speech

for Jim on you guys.  He’s retiring after

tonight and I wanted to make sure it

sounded alright.”

 

MONICA: It was wonderful and sweet.

 

Out of all the managers in the district,

it shows a lot for him to ask you.

 

MARK: I’m honored, I know.

 

AMBER: Aren’t they doing his award

first? 

 

MARK: Yeah, right after Slees opens.

 

HITHE: With Ski back now.  This feels

just like old times.

 

SKI: I know, it's so good to be home.

 

I missed you all. 

 

SUNSHINE: So, where is Ace?

 

HITHE: Who knows.  Probably getting his

billionth commemorative tattoo. 

 

MARK: Well, everyone eat and drink up.

 

The limo will be here in an hour to take

us to the ceremony. 

 

[ He motions for Ski to follow him out

to the living room. ]

 

MARK: Hey babe, we need to talk.  And

I couldn’t wait any longer.

 

SKI: Okay, what’s going on?

 

MARK: The speech wasn’t the only thing

that was talked about.  They want me to

step up as the new District Manager. 

 

SKI: That’s awesome! But I just got back.

 

MARK: I know, and you didn’t tell me

you were staying until this morning. 

 

I’m sorry, I’ve already said, ‘Yes’. 

 

[ They stand apart, not speaking. ]



[ An Hour Later . . .Outside The Ceremony. ]

 

[ Various team members from the district

arrive, fancily dressed and stopping to take

pictures on the blue carpet.

 

[ Mark & Ski step out of their limo.  They are

spotted by Mark’s Mirror ‘Manager Of The

Year’ frenemy and he strides over smirking

at them. ]

 

MIRRORMGR: So, are you ready to get

beat again?  Just like I beat you last year.

 

MARK: Oh buddy.

 

[ Mark pats him forcefully on the shoulder. ]

 

MARK: You take this too seriously.  I’m

just here to support my team. 

 

MIRRORMGR: Please, we all know you’ve

been itching for that 10th win for years now.

 

But newsflash, it’s never going to happen. 

 

MARK: Maybe not.  On the other hand, you

might want to start showing me a little

more respect.

 

MIRRORMGR: Why would I need to do that?

 

MARK: Because starting next month, I’m

your new boss.

 

MIRRORMGR: Jim asked you? 

 

MARK: Who else would he ask.  Have fun

at the awards though.

 

[ He laughs, taking Ski’s hand and posing

for a picture.

 

[ Further down the carpet; Stuu, Mila, Tiesun

& Rediki are taking pictures when Stuu notices

Weis, LeeVigh and their replacement band mate

getting out of their white limousine. 

 

Stuu leaves them to walk towards. ]

 

“Hey.”

 

[ Weis turns around. ]

 

WEIS: I was gonna call you.  Just

wasn’t sure if.  Anyway, it’s good to

see you. 

 

STUU: You too.  How have you been?

 

WEIS: Great!  Ever since we won the

band competition, it’s been non-stop

shows.  How are you and Mila?

 

STUU: We’re good.

 

WEIS: Well, I have to go get ready.

 

It’s almost show time.

 

[ He stares at Stuu, then joins the rest of

the band heading inside. ]



[ Milestone Awards . . .Inside The Ceremony. ]

 

[ After presenting a lifetime service award to Jim,

Mark walks off and Amber appears from back

stage in a flowing, off-the-shoulder blue dress.

Taking her place at the glass podium. ]

 


AMBER: The managers in this category

demonstrate what it takes to maintain

a store at a higher and more distinguished

level.  Setting us apart from the competition.

 

[ The audience starts in on a rousing clap. ]

 

“The nominees for ‘AM Of The Year’

are. . .”

 

AMBER: Hahn Kaphor.  TA-Magic Springs.

 

[ Hahh is shown in the audience with his

wife Syria, then a clip begins to play. ]

 

HAHN: The last twelve years at TA

has provided with me more than just

financial stability.  Working here

doesn’t feel like a job, it feels more

comforting.  Like a home.

 

[ Down in the audience, Erme & Yaz

are sitting in front of Hahn & Syria. ]

 

YAZ: Some home.

 

[ She whispers loudly to Erme. ]

 

ERME: Yeah.  How embarrassing!

 

[ Hahn overhears, Syria places her hand

firmly on his. Hoping he ignores them. ]

 

AMBER: And the winner is. . .

 

“Laura Braun.  TA-Mirror.”

 

[ The winner stands up in shock as Hahn

makes his way to the back of the room

in a huff. ]

 

MARK: Good!  Hopefully he takes

the hint and just leaves.

 

SKI: I can’t imagine him wanting to be

here.

 

[ The audience calms down as the AM

begins her speech. ]



[ Back At The Awards . . .On Stage. ]

 

[ Scott saunters up to the podium, wearing

all black.  Grinning with confidence, he scans

the audience.  Seeing Maxx, Ricky, Brian, &

Kira standing up cheering for him. ]


 

SCOTT: I was supposed to be sharing this

responsibility with my good friend, Brian.

 

But of course, when he was asked to make

up for someone who couldn’t make it

tonight.  He jumped at the chance to ditch

me! 

 

“Anyway, over the past year.  These four

nominees have not only proven what a

TA member should be but also take

the initiative to go above and beyond.”

 

“And the nominees are. . .”

 

“Maura Blackwell.  TA-Mirror.”

 

“Tyler Trullo.  TA-Maison City.”

 

“Ermensau Towne.  TA-Magic Springs.’

 

“Kelsie Cline.  TA-Round Rock.”

 

SCOTT: The winner is. . .

 

[ He opens the envelope. ]

 

SCOTT: Ermensau Towne.

 

[ Back in the audience, Hahn is standing

by the entrance. ]

 

HAHN: What a joke!

 

[ Erme gathers himself while Yaz escorts

him on to the stage.  Scott stops clapping,

standing away from them. ]

 

ERME: Wow, this is a huge surprise! 

 

I would like to start by thanking my

manager, Mark Simon.  Who is not just

a great boss but also an active friend

who really cares about his. . .

 

[ Erme is stunned as Hahn is seen running

from the doors to the stage.  Getting close

to Erme, he starts to shout at him. ]

 

“You should be in jail.”

 

ERME: Excuse me?

 

[ Hahn repeats himself.  Now close to the

microphone and in Erme’s face. ]

 

HAHN: You should be in jail, you

little horse fucker!

 

[ The crowd gasp at this reveal. ]

 

[ Mark stands up, heading to confront

Hahn but Ski stops him. Two security

guards arrive from the back and grab

Hahn, dragging him away from the

stage. ]

 

ERME: I guess someone had a bit too

much.

 

[ He laughs, nervously as the commotion

starts to die down. ]



[ Milestone Awards . . .Final Award. ]

 

[ Acer is on stage now. ]

 

ACE: Well, that was intense.  It wouldn’t

be a Milestone Awards or TA if something

out of the ordinary didn’t happen.

 

Kind of similar to our nominees in this

category.  Always thinking of out of the

box ways to keep our teams on their toes

and pushing our stores forward.

 


“Sunshine Walli.  TA Care.  Magic Springs.”

 

“Kiler Hydeen.  TA Kutz.  Round Rock.“

 

“Mark Simon.  TA Store.  Magic Springs.”

 

“Luke Bangel.  TA Store.  Mirror.”

 

ACE: The winner is. . .

 

Sunshine Walli.

 

[ Mark & all the other TA members from

Magic Springs stand up to congratulate

her.  Jeszyca escorts Sunshine up to the

stage.

 

Down in the audience, Tiesun notices Rediki

hasn’t returned from his bathroom break. ]

 

[ On the phone, outside. ]

 

REDIKI: I’m at an award show with

my girl but it will be over soon.

 

Oh yeah.  Everything is all good.

 

Everyone at TA bought that whole

I want to kill myself scene. It got

me exactly what I needed and more.

 

[ He hauls out a sinister laugh. ]

 

“And what was that exactly?”

 

[ Rediki turns around seeing Tiesun

and hangs up. ]

 

TIESUN: So, it was all some sick game.

 

A lie to get our sympathy.  Was any of this

even real?

 

[ She starts to walk away but he takes her

hand tuning her to him. ]

 

REDIKI: Wait, it wasn’t all a lie.  I was sad and

the family part is true.

 

Also, the way I feel about you.

 

[ She drops his hand, slowly backing away. ]

 

TIESUN: You know what.  Stuu was right.

 

I don’t know you at all.  I’m going back

 inside.

 

REDIKI: Tie, come on! Just let me explain. 

 

[ She turns around looking ice cold

in his direction. ]

 

TIESUN: Don’t!  Follow me.  


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