Now . . .Finale: Part One | Next . . .Sept 18th.
Showing posts with label Jared M.. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Jared M.. Show all posts

December 1, 2010

315 Letter From a Thief


[ Kristyn walks up to
Hithe, who is kneeling
down by their son’s
grave ]

‘Hey. . .’

[ Hithe stands up
and puts his arm
around her ]

HITHE: I’m glad
you’re here
KRISTYN: It took me
awhile. . .but this
is something
I needed to do

[ He’s still staring
down. . . ]

KRISTYN: I just
wonder what
our lives would
have been like
if our son had
made it out of
the hospital
HITHE: Well. . .
I would hope
that we could
finally move in
together

KRISTYN: I thought
we were waiting
until my kids got
a little older
Isn’t that what
you were saying
last night?

HITHE: Yeah, it’s
not that though

There’s something
else bothering
me

KRISTYN: What is it?

HITHE: Something
happened that
night at the
hospital Kristyn
I’m certain, and
we should be
doing something
about it

KRISTYN: Like what?
I thought you
said the doctor
did everything
he could
HITHE: He did
Nevermind, I’m
sorry. . .

[ He stands up and
she starts walking
away ]

HITHE: Where are
you going?
KRISTYN: I’ll just
see you at work

Bye

[ Hithe hears her
car start & drive
off/ Minutes later
he’s walking out
of the graveyard
and his phone
rings ]

‘Morning, , .
It’s Jared’

HITHE: Hey, how
are things?
JARED MEYHR: I
was just calling
to let you know
that I’m in the
beginnings of
your case. . .

They know we’re
coming after them
now

HITHE: Okay, that’s
good
JARED MEYHR: Yeah,
I’ve got it all under
control. . .So,we
just sit back, relax
and wait for them
to respond

Oh, and don’t
do anything
crazy, okay?

HITHE: Wait,
what?
JARED MEYHR: I’ll
just say I’ve heard
stories about your
past behaviors

Anyway, I’ll
be in touch!

[ The line goes
dead. . . ]


[ At Jeszyca’s, she rolls
over in bed/ Standing
up she enters the
bathroom and stands
in front of the sink ]

[ Looking at the
mirror, she sighs ]

[ Getting closer
she sees a small
gray hair shining
in the light. . . ]


[ At the hospital
a receptionist
sees a man enter
the building ]

‘Sir, can I help
you?’

HITHE: Yeah,
I’m looking for
Doctor Keller,
Is he in?

[ Looks around ]

RECEPTIONIST: Do
you have an
appointment?
Mr. . .

HITHE: No, I just
needed to ask
him something
RECEPTIONIST: Well,
he’s with a patient
at the moment
Wait here and
I’ll see what I
can do
HITHE: Sure

[ She walks off into
the back/ As soon
as the coast is
clear, Hithe hurries
through the doors. . .
walking toward the
examining rooms ]


[ Meanwhile at
TA. . . ]

‘Morning Kyle’

[ Kyle looks up
and sees Amber
waving near him ]

KYLE: What a
surprise
You seem to
be in a good
mood today
AMBER: Yeah,
should I not
be?

[ She gives him
a look as she
walks away ]


[ Back at the
hospital a nurse
sees Hithe stand-
ing in the hall ]

‘Sir, you can’t
just walk back
here’

[ Just as Hithe
goes to turn
and run out he
bumps into
Dr. Keller ]

HITHE: Sorry

DR KELLER: What
are you doing
here?

HITHE: I hope
you’re ready
to pay for what
you did to my
son

DR KELLER: Mr.
Larohzyn, right?
Listen, I don’t
know where the
hell you get off
coming in here
like this but if
I were you I would
leave now before
I have you thrown
out

[ Hithe sees two
security officers
approaching. . . ]


[ Downtown Jeszyca
is sitting at a table
in an outdoor
restaurant and
sees Larrie
walking from
across the street ]

‘I can’t believe
I let you talk
me out of my
bed so early’

LARRIE: So, what
are we doing
out here?
JESZYCA: I just
needed to talk
to someone,
sorry. . .
LARRIE: It’s fine,
I’m guessing
you didn’t
have the flu
when you
missed work
the other night

JESZYCA: No,
not exactly [ sighs ]

I’m getting old
That’s has to
be the reason
I got dumped

LARRIE: What,
you’re crazy?
You’re only
twenty-eight
JESZYCA: It
might as well
be thirty. . .
And this morn-
ing I found a
gray hair!

[ He starts to
laugh and she
hits him. . . ]

LARRIE: Look, I’m
probably the
last person
you would
expect to get
advice from

But if she was
the one. . .I
don’t think
little things
like your age,
or hair color
would matter
to her

JESZYCA: Yeah,
you’re probably
right


[ At TheAisles ]

‘Hey, wasn’t
Hithe suppose
to be here?’

KRISTYN: Yeah,
he’s almost two
hours late. . .
He was acting
really weird
this morning
MONICA: Kristyn,
men are weird

Perfect example,
Kyle over there
Do you not recall
his recent game?

KRISTYN: Of course

[ She turns around
rolling her eyes,
just as Hithe walks
in the store. . . ]

[ Hithe whispers
something to
Ace before
Kristyn comes
over ]

‘Where have
you been?’

HITHE: Don’t
worry. . .Ace
covered for me
KRISTYN: That’s
not the point
First this morning
and now you’re
late. . .What is
going on Hithe?

Are you drink-
Ing again?

[ He turns around ]

HITHE: No. . .
How could you
even ask me
that?

[ He walks away
and leaves her
standing there ]


[ Before Hithe gets
to the back his
phone rings. . . ]

‘Hello. . .’

HITHE: Oh, hey
Jared
What’s up?

Yeah, and what
are they saying?

They want to
settle on how
much?

[ He stands there
in shock as his
phone falls out
of his hand and
hits the floor ]

December 31, 2009

201 PSYCHO [ SEASON PREMIERE ]

( Twisted&Tragic/#3 )

'Get away from me…now!'




HUSBAND: What?

You need to calm down.

Remember what happened the last time?

KRISTYN: Stop telling me what to do!

HUSBAND: Something's wrong with you…

You're getting all these mood swings

and you're just not the same anymore

KRISTYN: Yeah, and do you have any idea

why I'm like this? [ pauses for a second ]

. . .It's you!

HUSBAND: Me? What have I done???

KRISTYN: You're always stressing me out

and bothering me with dumb, unimportant shit

that doesn't matter!

HUSBAND: Well, I'm sorry…

I didn't realize it was so annoying for me

to show concern for my own wife!



[ Kristyn stares at him then turns away ]



HUSBAND: I'm going to pick up our kids

from school…

Remember them? Or are they just another

cramp in your style these days.


[ Turns around and the door slams as he leaves ]





[ At TA Amber, Monica, and Dina are working

when Mark comes up with a new girl. ]



MARK: Morning everyone…

This is our new night cashier Jeszyca

JESZYCA: Hi

MARK: She'll be starting in a few weeks

...Amber can you show her around for me?

AMBER: OK

MARK: Thanks, I appreciate it [ He leaves ]



JESZYCA: So, is this where I'll be working?

AMBER: Yeah, I guess they're only running

the self checkouts at night…

They haven't told us much

JESZYCA: OK, that makes sense…

Is this easy to learn?

AMBER: Yeah...

All you really have to do is watch

and if someone is stuck you'll see a light over

their lane

JESZYCA: Wow, that's it?

It's must getting pretty boring.[ smiles ]

AMBER: Boring? Oh, no... Trust me

there's always something interesting

going on around here

JESZYCA: Well, that's good!

Thanks for helping me Amber. . .

Maybe I'll see you around



[ Amber looks up & sees Jeszyca looking right at her ]





[ At TA's checkout lanes. ]



MONICA: So, it's true…

We are going 24 hours soon

DINA: Yeah, were going to have a whole new shift

and we don't even have a manager for this one

MONICA: Well, I'm sure we're getting one soon…

I mean, Mark is so busy with hiring new

people right now

DINA: I guess, but it's been over a week

and it's not even been mentioned

MONICA: There's nothing we can do about it

but wait and see



[ A customer comes into Monica's lane. ]



MONICA: Morning…

Did you find everything you were

looking for today?





[ Back at Kristyn's/ Sitting on the couch she's shaking

trying to calm down and her husband comes in ]



[ stands up ] KRISTYN: Hi

HUSBAND: Hey…

KRISTYN: Where are the kids?

HUSBAND: I thought it would be better

if they went to my mom's for the night

KRISTYN: Oh



[ Her husband starts to go upstairs… ]



KRISTYN: Wait…

I'm sorry OK

HUSBAND: Yeah OK

KRISTYN: Seriously, I couldn't help myself

. . .I just lost control

HUSBAND: I know, but this isn't normal Kristyn

It has to be something else going on...

KRISTYN: Well, I don't need any help

I'll just deal with it on my own

HUSBAND: Are you sure?

KRISTYN: I promise



[ Kristyn's cell rings/ She sees it's Hithe

and ignores it ]



HUSBAND: Who was that?

KRISTYN: Just work…I'll call back later

Let's go upstairs and relax

HUSBAND: Alright





[ At Hithe's apartment someone knocks on the door. ]



HITHE: Hey, I didn't think you would show…

SKI: Yeah, well I wanted to check

and see how you we're doing

. . .So what are you doing?

HITHE: Not much, just watching a movie



[ They walk into the living room. ]


SKI: Damn! What you do?

Jack a liquor store...

HITHE: Not hardly! [ laughs ]

...No, I'm just taking some time to enjoy myself

SKI: Yeah, I can see that…

So what about work?

HITHE: I don't know…

I haven't really thought about it [ opens a beer ]

SKI: What?

HITHE: I mean, in another week I'll get myself

together and start looking…

But right now I'm just gonna take it easy

SKI: Well, it's won't be real easy when you're

stretched out on the street somewhere

HITHE: Huh? Don't worry, I'm fine…

SKI: And what about Kristyn?

HITHE: She won't even call me…

SKI: Well, I imagine it's hard to call you

with her husband's being right there

and he seems very protective to me

HITHE: I guess…

But it seems like one minute she wants me

around and the next minute she doesn't

SKI: Yeah, I know

HITHE: Oh well [ looks down ]

SKI: So this is really what you do all day?

Sit around in your underwear and watch TV. . .

HITHE: Yeah, pretty much! [ laughs ]



SKI: Well, I have to leave and get Weis soon

HITHE: OK, thanks for coming by Ski…

Maybe we can go out some night soon

SKI: Yeah, maybe…





[ Back at the store/ In the break room. ]







AMBER: Man, we're so busy today!



MONICA: I know, this is the first break



I've had since I got here



AMBER: Me too



and we only have a few hours left



MONICA: So, you hear from Hithe lately



How is he doing?



AMBER: Fine, I guess…



But he's not really doing anything



MONICA: Really?



AMBER: Yeah, getting fired has 



messed with him



MONICA: Aww, that's too bad



Well, tell him I said 'Hi' when you see him



again



AMBER: OK, I will…





[ Monica walks out and Mark bumps into her. ]



MARK: Oops, sorry Monica.

MONICA: It's OK…

Uh, are you alright?

MARK: Yeah, just been doing interviews

and trying to balance everything else



[ They start walking to the front. ]



MONICA: Wow.

Sounds like you need some help…

MARK: Yeah, I need a lot of it. . .

and I'm having problems finding a new manager

. . .Things are really hectic rite now!

MONICA: Yeah, I know…



[ Monica starts walking back to her lane/

Suddenly someone in a black hoodie runs right

passed them. ]



MARK: Hey, slow down! [ sees something in his hand ]



[ Mark runs outside and grabs a hold of him. ]



MARK: Drop the shit or I'll drop you!



[ The man throws the food and as he turns around for a

second his hood falls down/ Mark bends down to pick up

the groceries then turns around and Monica's standing there. ]



MARK: Can you believe that?  Man!



[ Monica's still standing there in silence. ]



MARK: Uh, Monica?

[ snaps out of it ] MONICA: Yeah. . .

No, I can't believe that.

Some people are just really desperate, I guess

. . .You OK?

MARK: Yeah, let's get back inside





[ Her husband is awake and Kristyn is turned over/ He slowly

gets down and picks up her cell phone off the nightstand ]



KRISTYN: Where you going? [ turns around ]

HUSBAND: Nowhere, I was just…

KRISTYN: Wait, what are you doing?

HUSBAND: Just using your phone…

I can't find mine

KRISTYN: Yours is right over there on the dresser

Did you look at all? [ takes it back ]

Uh, why were you in the call log?

HUSBAND: Well, I was just…

KRISTYN: Just what?

HUSBAND: Why is Hithe calling you so much?

KRISTYN: I don't know

HUSBAND: Well, how come you didn't

answer it earlier?

KRISTYN: I didn't wanna talk. . .

But you shouldn't have had my phone

to begin with [ gets up ]

HUSBAND: Where you going?

KRISTYN: I'm going out…

I need to be away from you 

HUSBAND: No!

KRISTYN: What? You can't stop me…

HUSBAND: We're gonna sit down and talk about this!

…Why can't you just be honest with me?

KRISTYN: There's nothing to be honest about…

HUSBAND: I'm not stupid, Kristyn!

You know what I think?

I think, you've been sneaking around behind my back

KRISTYN: Well, you can keep thinking that…

I'm leaving



[ Her husband grabs her hand & she turns around ]



HUSBAND: Kristyn, wait!

Please….let's just sit down

KRISTYN: I said, NO!



[ She smacks him in the face & pushes him off of her/

Falling to the floor he hits his head on the nightstand ]





[ Kristyn stands there in shock as he just lays there

still on the floor. ]




(                   Edited 0924                    )



December 30, 2009

111 FAMOUS LAST WORDS


[ In Kristyn's living room. ]

KRISTYN: Can't you control your own kids?

HUSBAND: I'm trying to, but they won't listen.

[ sighs ] KRISTYN: I thought I was the woman

in our relationship… [ stands up ]

OK, you two that's enough!



Sit down now and watch cartoons.

HUSBAND: I'm sorry babe

KRISTYN: You know I feel like shit,

I shouldn't have to run after the kids too

HUSBAND: I know, maybe you should go lay down

KRISTYN: No, I'll be fine…



[ Kristyn sits and waits for everyone to fall asleep

then walks slowly to the door. ]



[ hearing the door ] HUSBAND: Hey, where you going?

KRISTYN: I need some fresh air…

I'll be right back

HUSBAND: OK, love you!



[ Kristyn shuts the door & leaves. ]





[ Back in the store cooler. ]



SKI: So…what now?

WEIS: That was my first time

SKI: You mean…

WEIS: Yes I was a virgin

SKI: Oh. Well that's fine,

WEIS: Please don't tell anyone about this.

SKI: OK, but let's get back to work

before the others start to wonder…



[ Weis quick kisses him & leaves ]





[ Back at Kristyn's… ]



HUSBAND: Hey, your back

KRISTYN: Yeah

HUSBAND: Where'd you go?

KRISTYN: Just around the neighborhood

HUSBAND: Oh, well are you hungry?

I ordered pizza…

KRISTYN: Naw, I'm just gonna lay down

HUSBAND: OK babe



[ Kristyn goes upstairs & sits on the bed taking

out a bag from the inside of her jacket. ]





[ Back at The Aisles.]



WEIS: Look Ski, it's getting light out…

SKI: Yeah, almost time to go



SKI: Since we're done…

Let's go wait outside

WEIS: OK cool





[ Back at Kristyn's/ She's coming out

the bathroom looking down. ]



HUSBAND: The kids are finalie sleeping

[ looks at her ] Hey, what's wrong?

[ coughs ] KRISTYN: Nothing, just a little tired

[ gets into bed ]

HUSBAND: You feeling any better?

[ turns over ] KRISTYN: Yeah, I'm fine now

HUSBAND: Good! I was worried about you

But since you're all better…

[ moves closer and starts touching her ]

KRISTYN: Get off of me!

I just wanna go to bed…OK?

HUSBAND: OK, I'm sorry.

Goodnight! [ rolls over ]





[ Outside the store/ Weis opens a pack of

cigarettes ]



SKI: You smoke?

WEIS: Yeah… [ lights one ]

Do you?

SKI: Nope, never have…

WEIS: Oh

SKI: Yeah, so do your parents know?

WEIS: My parents! Yeah right

they'd kill me…

They already don't like me

SKI: Oh, why is that?

WEIS: I don't know…

It's like, I can never do anything right

as far as they're concerned

SKI: Aw, I'm sorry

WEIS: It's alright…

Look how pretty the sky is right now

SKI: Yeah [ smiles ]





[ Kristyn sees her husband asleep & grabs her cell/

Getting up she walks downstairs & toward the

front door. ]





[ Back at the store Ski & Weis are outside/

Joh & Airynn pass by looking at them. ]



WEIS: Those dumb fucks!

SKI: Yeah, who cares what they think!

It only matters how you feel about yourself

WEIS: Right

and sitting here with you is making me feel

really good.



[ Ski notices Weis moving his hand towards his. ]





[ Kristyn's sitting outside on her porch/

Starts dialing her cell & gets a VM. ]



KRISTYN: Hey Hithe, it's me…

I really need to talk to you

So call me back, OK? Bye



[ Sighs & sits there waiting… ]





[ Ski's just about to grab Weis' hand,

but he moves it suddenly. ]



WEIS: Here comes Mark!

SKI: What? Oh, I see him…



[ Mark walks up to them & keeps walking

towards the door. ]



SKI: Uh, morning Mark!

WEIS: Hey Mark!

[ turns around ] MARK: Oh, sorry…

Didn't see you guys there

SKI: It's OK, how are you?

MARK: I'm fine… [ looks away ]

I gotta get in though, I'll see you later



[ stands up ] SKI: Something's wrong with him…

He's acting weird

WEIS: How could you tell? It's Mark!

SKI: Maybe I should go talk to him

[ starts walking away… ]



WEIS: Wait Ski, can you give me a ride home?

SKI: Yeah sure…

Just wait, I'll be right back



[ Ski catches up to Mark on his way to the back. ]



SKI: Mark!

MARK: Uh hi, thought you were leaving…

SKI: I was, but I wanted to see you first

…What's wrong?

MARK: Nothing [ looks down ]

SKI: Come on, Mark!

You always talk to me…

[ looks at him ] MARK: So, you taking him home?

SKI: Yeah, I guess…Why?

MARK: No reason… [ pauses for a second ]

Do you like Weis?

SKI: Uh, I don't know

MARK: Well, it seems like you do

SKI: No, he likes me…and he's really nice, so?

MARK: Oh, that's good! It's just…

SKI: Just what?

MARK: Nothing, I just don't want

you getting hurt like last time

[ looks at him ] SKI: Thanks Mark, but I'll be OK

I have to leave though…Call me later!

MARK: OK bye





[ Kristyn's still sitting outside & is startled

by her cell ringing. ]



HITHE: Hey, you sounded upset in your message…

What's wrong?

KRISTYN: Well, I don't know quite how to tell

you this

HITHE: It's OK, just tell me

I'm listening…

KRISTYN: OK, here goes…

[ clears her throat ] I'm pregnant!



(               Edited 0516             )