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March 5, 2025

Before The Finale: Dismantled [ #Surprise25 ]

 

[ The Café . . .Across From TA. ]

[ Jeszyca, Amber, & Tiesun are deep
into conversation on their lunch. ]

JESZYCA: So, how is Ava doing?

AMBER: She’s been fine for the last
few days. Her doctor started her on
some new medication so we’re just
hoping that it helps.

On the other hand, I’m pretty sure my
3rd grader has a crush on someone. But
he won’t tell me who, of course.  

TIESUN: Really, isn’t he friends with
Mila?

Wouldn’t it be wild if it was her?   

JESZYCA: Stuu’s daughter?  

TIESUN: Yeah.

AMBER: She’s about to graduate this
year.  I doubt it.  

JESZYCA: I mean, you’re one to talk.
Hello! Your husband is much older. 

Maybe it runs in the family.  

[ Amber grabs a roll off the table
and tosses it at her but she catches
it. ]

JESZYCA: Anyway, switching gears.

Who is that guy I saw walking you
to your car the other night?

TIESUN: That was Rediki.  He’s a new
hire.  

And it’s a very, long story. 

[ They both look at Tiesun, intrigued. ]

JESZYCA: Go on then.  We’ve got time. 


[ Attica Elementary School . . .Cafeteria Area. ]

[ Dibur is nervously sitting at the table,
staring across the room when two of
his buddies sit down next to him. ]

“Who are you looking at?”

DIBUR: No one.

JOEY: He likes Mila and is too
much of a baby to tell her.

[ The other guys laugh. ]

DIBUR: I am not! I’m telling her
today.

[ He states, frustrated and chewing
on his pizza slice. ]

BRODIE: Just go over there and
ask her out right now.  Before
someone else does.

JOEY: If you’re not scared.  

[ Dibur sighs, getting up from his seat.
Finding Mila at a table with her best 
friend Xalia he stops. ]

DIBUR: Hey.

[ He smiles big at Mila. ]

MILA: What’ s up?

DIBUR: Would you like to
go out with me?

MILA: Sure.  We hang out all
the time.  

[ Dibur looks away. ]

XALIA: I think he’s asking you
to be his girlfriend.  

[ She starts to cackle, knocking
over her drink. ]

MILA: Seriously?

[ She questions but can tell from Dibur’s
expression what he means. ]

MILA: I’m sorry.  I can’t.  

[ Dibur turns around, turning red &
taking off out of the room. ]


[ Towne Ranch . . .Near The Stables. ]

[ Erme is walking toward the barn eager
to start his normal task, when he is met
by his father and an unknown male. ]

ERME: Hey Dad, who is this?

MERRILTOWNE: This is Pablo Saint John.

I hired him to keep an eye on the horses.

ERME: Okay, but I do that.  

MERRILTOWNE: Why don’t you go have
a look around, so you can get used to the 
property?  I’ll be back with you in a bit.

[ The stranger leaves and he continues. ]

MERRILTOWNE: Not anymore!

Your manager called me yesterday.

ERME: What about?

MERRILTOWNE: I don’t even want to
voice this.  But have you been screwing
around with the animals?

ERME: No Dad!  I could never.

MERRILTOWNE: You’re lying Ermensau,
I can always tell. You need help and until
you get it you won’t be allowed back here.


ERME: Mark would never do this to me.

Who called you?

[ His Dad ignores the question. ]

MERRILTOWNE: Just go back to the house!

I have business to attend to.  

[ He looks at Erme with anger and disappoint
-ment streaked across his face. ]


[ Amber & Dyminic’s . . .Later That Day. ]

[ Dyminic is sitting in his office when
he sees his son appear in the doorway. ]

“Hey, you we’re quiet at dinner.  

Is something going on?”

DIBUR: I don’t want to go back
to school.  Ever.

DYMINIC: Okay. . .Why?

DIBUR: I asked out this girl.

And she said no. Everyone
made fun of me.

DYMINIC: I’m sorry.  Was she older
than you?

DIBUR: It was Mila.

DYMINIC: I see.  Well, you are way too 
young to be even thinking about dating,
Mr.  

Focus right now on school, your
friends and your sports.  

DIBUR: But I really like her.

DYMINIC: I know but you have
to settle on just being her friend.

 Don’t worry. When you’re ready. . .



The 3Ms Airport . . .On The Plane. ]

[ After heaving their luggage into place,
Jeszyca & Sunshine sit relaxed in their
first class seats. ]

JESZYCA: I have a surprise for you.

SUNSHINE: Another one?  As if the
spontaneous weekend trip wasn’t
enough.  

[ She hands her girlfriend an envelope
adorned in fancy letters spelling out
her full name. ]

JESZYCA: It’s from TA Corporate.  

Do you know what this means?

SUNSHINE: I’m getting the can?

JESZYCA: No.  Just open it.  

[ She peels the sticker back, revealing
the invitation. ]

“ You And A Guest Are Invited To
Our Annual Milestone Awards. . .

NOMINEE: Manager Of The Year. “

SUNSHINE: Oh my God!  This isn’t real.

JESZYCA: Are you kidding me?  It was
your idea to open on Saturday’s.  Plus how
Care’s client based has increased over the
past year.  They would be insane to not
nominate you.  

SUNSHINE: Yeah, but I’m up against Mark
and that Mirror manager.  They get nominated
ever year.  

JESZYCA: Oh well.  Just lay back and relax.

When we get to beach.  We’re celebrating.


[ Attica Elementary School . . .The Next Day. ]

[ Dibur arrives at school, looking for his
friends when he notices Brodie down the
 hall perched by a window with Mila. ]

[ Seeing them laughing & sitting close
insights his rage, as Dibur picks up his
pace toward them. ]

JOEY: Hey, what are you doing?

[ He calls to Dibur as he walks past.
Eyes set on Brodie. 

Reaching them now, he pushes Brodie
knocking him back into a plant fixture. ]

BRODIE: What is your problem?

[ He shouts, standing up but Dibur stays
silent.  Teasing him with his fist. ]

MILA: Enough!  

[ Joey runs up grabbing Dibur from
behind and pulling him in the other
direction. 

Mila walks away with her arm around
Brodie, guiding him to the office. ]


[ Back At Towne Ranch . . . ]

[ Erme sneaks down to the Stables. On
a mission after everyone at home is 
sleeping. ]

He attempts to open the door, not noticing
the locks that have been installed. ]


[ Erme let’s out a howling yell of defeat.
Kicking the doors, over and over again. 

Eventually, falling to the ground with 
tears streaming down his face. ]


[ Ocean Beach, CA . . . ]

[ After lounging in the sand all day,
Jeszyca & Sunshine are sitting at
a fancy dining table talking over
food and glasses of wine. ]

“This has been amazing!”

[ She gleams, kissing Jeszyca on
the cheek. ]


SUNSHINE: It is.  And it was exactly
what I needed. Thank you.

JESZYCA: We’ve been through so much
over the last six years but I feel like all
of it has just made us stronger as a couple.

And that’s why I wanted to know if.

[ She stands.  On her knees in front of 
Sunshine now, she presents her with
a diamond ring. ]

“Will You Marry Me?”


[ Meanwhile . . .At Syria & Hahn’s. ]

SYRIA: Mark’s on the porch.  He said
he needs to talk to you.

HAHN: Okay?  Since when does our
manager make house calls at night?

[ He joins Mark outside. ]

HAHN: Are you here to congratulate
me on my 'AM Of The Year' nom?  

MARK: Not exactly.  I’m here to ask
you if you were the one who contacted
Erme’s parents.

[ Hahn freezes for a second. ]

HAHN: They needed to know.  It could
have affected their business.

MARK: I told you to stay out of it!  

Either way, it wasn’t your place.

HAHN: I’m sorry, Mark.  At least now
he is getting the help that he clearly
needs.

I did that kid a favor.

MARK: No, I’m sorry Hahn.  This wasn’t
the right way.  

And you’re fired! Don’t come back to TA.  

[ Mark drives off, leaving Hahn trembling
with wrath. ]


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February 19, 2014

Off Key

SCENE 1

[ Chais & Jenni are laying on
the couch together while Billy
is doing laps around it. ]

CHAIS: Dude, chill out
before Ski comes down
here bitching.

[ Billy returns to the couch. ]

BILLY:  Sorry but all of a
sudden I have this crazy
energy around me.

I can’t stop moving.

[ He starts shaking his leg. ]

JENNI: Maybe you should
have talked to his parents
before messing with his
meds.
BILLY: I can hear you.  And
they're always saying I should
take it right.

So I did.  Anyways, I’m gonna
head home.  Be back later.

[ Billy runs out the door as Chais
brother comes downstairs looking
around. ]

JAI:  I swear, I heard cattle in
here just a second ago.

CHAIS: Yeah that was just Billy.

High off his ass.

[ Chais laughs while everyone
else looks concerned. ]


SCENE 2
At Weis’ apartment. . .

[ People are lining up down
the driveway outside. ]

“You all ready for the auditions?”

WEIS: Yeah, I can’t believe
so many showed up.  Its
just a local band.  Now
I know we’ll find someone.

So, what are you gonna
do for two hours?

JOH: I’m gonna go see
what Stuu is up to.
WEIS: Cool, cool.  Well,
LeeVigh should be back
any time now to start.
JOH: I’m surprised you
got him to join you.
Ever since he got that
promotion.  He’s been
all about work.

WEIS: Yeah, I know.  That’s
why this will be a good thing.
Plus he’s a bad ass drummer.

JOH: Someone's here!

[ LeeVigh pulls into the drive
& parks his car, walking inside. ]

“You weren’t kidding about the
all day thing!”


SCENE 3
Back at Chais’ place.

CHAIS: Now that we’re alone.
I think we should talk.

[ Jenni sits up & looks at
Chais. ]

JENNI: About Billy?
CHAIS: No.  About that guy
I saw you talking to when
I picked you up earlier.

JENNI: Okay.  His name is
Juan.  He’s a new bagger.
What else would you like
to know?
CHAIS: I don’t know.  It seems
like he was flirting with you.

Do I need to talk to this guy?

[ Jenni gets off of Chais. ]

JENNI: No.  Do you not trust me?
Most guys flirt. It's nothing.
CHAIS: Babe, it’s not that.

JENNI: Okay then.  Don’t worry.
Everyone knows I have a
boyfriend.  At school too.

[ She kisses Chais & he starts
to relax. ]


SCENE 4


[ Weis & LeeVigh are standing
behind a table as various male
musicians stand up to perform.

They give feedback right away. ]

WEIS: I’m sorry.  We didn’t feel
like it was enough.

[ The guy starts to walk away as
they whisper. ]

LEEVIGH: He was pretty good.
WEIS: I don’t think so.

Next one please!

[ After another hour of bad
auditions according to Weis,
LeeVigh pulls his band mate
aside. ]

LEEVIGH: I think you should
relax a little.  I mean some
of those guys could have worked.
WEIS: I just want the band to
work well together.  I know it
when I see it.

[ Suddenly Joh returns & he’s
not alone. ]

STUU: Hey guys, are you still
doing auditions?


SCENE 5

[ Chais & Jenni are watching
a movie when her phone
goes off. ]

CHAIS: Want me to pause it?
JENNI: No, it’s just a text.  I
can answer it later.

[ She quickly glances at it
& then puts it away. ]

CHAIS: Who was that?

[ Jenni looks up at him. ]

CHAIS: What? I’m just curious.

It was Juan, wasn’t it?
I can’t believe you gave
him your number.
JENNI: Calm down, he’s just
a friend.

CHAIS: Listen babe, I don’t
want you to talk to him.
He seems like a creep.
JENNI:  Well, I’m sorry you
fell that way but you do
not get to decide who my
friends are.

[ She stands up, facing Chais. ]

JENNI: I’m just gonna go.  See
you at school tomorrow.

CHAIS: You’re serious? 

[ She walks out the door
leaving him standing there. ] 


SCENE 6


“Hell no!

Absolutely not!”

STUU: Look, I know I haven’t
exactly gotten along with
either of you at points.

JOH: But he wrote a song.
And I think you should
hear it.

WEIS: Alright fine.

[ Weis & LeeVigh return to
the table.  With everyone else
gone, Stuu takes his position in
front of the mic, guitar in his hand.

He strums a few soft chords and then
powers into a mid-tempo love song. ]


Standing there, watching as Stuu digs
deep into his emotions.  Weis can’t
help but stare. ]

LEEVIGH: Alright, okay.

[ He puts his hand up. ]

LEEVIGH: What do you think?

WEIS: As much as I may regret
this later, I think we found
our 3rd member.


Congratulations, I guess.

NEW PREVIEW:


(Updated 11/24)

November 6, 2013

Not My Fantasy

SCENE 1
Office, TA Salon.

[ Hithe answers the phone. ]

ACE: Hey Hithe, just wanted
to remind you about payroll.
HITHE: Yeah, I know man.  You
left me a list.  Anyway the Salon
should really be the last thing
on your mind right now. 

Just concentrate on getting
to feeling better, okay?
ACE: I will.  But there was
one more thing though.
Oh yeah, if Jim calls don’t
say anything about our
new receptionist.  I didn’t
exactly clear things first.
HITHE: Cool, I won’t mention it.
I know you’re worried, but things
will turn out fine here.  Trust me.

Yeah, call us later.

[ Hithe hangs up & walks up
front where Jeszyca is talking
to Sascha near her station. ]

JESZYCA: And that’s why I got
fired from TA.

HITHE: Not wasting any time with
the secrets are we?
JESZYCA: I was protecting that woman.
I’m not ashamed of what I did.
SASCHA: I think she did the right thing.

[ They both look at Hithe. ]

HITHE: Well, my boss Jim may
disagree with that.

That’s why we’re not telling
him we hired you back.


SCENE 2:
Night before, at TA.

[ Early in the night, Tiesun
is counting the drawer when
her manager Ski approaches. ]

“So, how are you liking it
here so far?”

TIESUN: It’s cool.  Most of
the guys act decent. 
SKI: Yeah.  Things are remotely
chill the majority of the night.
It can get kind of boring. 
TIESUN: I’ll be good. I was a little
curious about why the last girl
was let go so quickly. 

[ Ski just looks at her. ]

TIESUN: Sorry, your employees
talk. 
SKI: Just make sure you’re not
carrying any sharp weapons
on you. 

[ Ski starts laughing & Tiesun
joins in. Then he stops. ]

SKI: I’m serious. 
 
[ After Ski leaves, Stuu walks up,
standing by Tiesun. ]

TIESUN: Something you wanna
tell me?
STUU: Yes sorry.  Meet me in the
front break room.  On lunch.


SCENE 3:
Back at the Salon.

[ Jeszyca is taking a payment
from a customer when Hithe
comes up beside her. ]

HITHE:  How are things going?
JESZYCA: It’s been awhile since
I worked this type of job but
I’m catching on to it. 

By the way, you don’t have
to keep an eye on me. 

I’m not psychotic. 
HITHE: Oh, I know. I mean,
you we’re dating my friend
Amber.  Must be at least
somewhat sane. 

[ He smirks at her, walking
toward the Salon floor. ]

HITHE: Did you get my note
about the cut at 5?
SASCHA: Yup.  I should be done
with this one soon.
HITHE: Good.  I’ll be in the back.

[ Meanwhile, Jeszyca is drinking
her coffee and doing some
organizing around her desk. 

Not paying attention, a man
enters the Salon.  Getting her
attention, he slides a small
retractable knife onto the table. ]


SCENE 4:
Middle of night, TA.

[ Tiesun is walking toward the
break room, & sees Airynn &
Larrie sneaking out the door. ]

TIESUN: What’s going on?

[ They just walk off.  When
she opens the door, the lights
are shut off & she sees a table
set up with candles all around.

Suddenly Stuu steps out from
the darkness.  ]

STUU: Shall we eat?

[ He smiles at her & they
sit down. A few minutes
pass… ]

TIESUN: Thanks for this.
It was really good. 
Listen, we’ve been
friends for awhile now.
STUU: I know, and even though
there may be things we don’t
agree on.  Our personalities
are so similar I think we could
make this work. 

What I’m trying to say is.  Tie,
I really want you to be my
girlfriend. 


SCENE 5:
Inside the Salon.

[ Hithe notices the commotion
& comes up beside Jeszyca. ]

HITHE: Hi, I’m the manager.  Can
I help you?
MAN: Maybe.  This bitch is the
one who stabbed me in my
leg at TA a few months ago.

JESZYCA: You were assaulting
someone.

[ The man grabs the knife off
the table. ]

MAN: And your boys at night
did a lousy job trying to hide
the evidence.

[ Hithe just looks at Jeszyca
in surprise. ]

HITHE: What is it that you
want? 
MAN: I’m sure the news would
love to hear this story. 
HITHE: Okay, I’ll make you a
deal.  But let’s take this outside,
alright?

[ Hithe comes back a short
time later. ]

HITHE: Don’t worry he won’t
be coming around here or TA
any longer.

I took care of it.


SCENE 6:
Parking lot, at TA.

[ The sun is starting to come up
as Tiesun & Stuu are sitting
on the curb. ]

TIESUN: Say something, please.
STUU: How come you never
brought up this guy before?

We talk about everything.
TIESUN: I just met him two
weekends ago.  And you’ve
known for how long that
you were into me and never
spoke up.
Damn it, why do you always
have to be so secretive?

I’m sorry, but I just don’t.
STUU: It’s cool.  I understand.


[ He gets up & starts walking
away, ignoring Tiesun’s calls
to him. ]


[ Meanwhile, at the hospital
Ace is waking up. ]

ACE: Hey babe, how’d it go?

[ Karie comes to his side. ]

KARIE: The doctor’s coming
in to talk to you.
ACE: Okay, what’s going on?

KARIE: It failed, Ace.  The

operation didn’t work.  

[ She states, tearing up as he holds
on to her. ]


 NEW PREVIEW 11/13! 


(Updated 11/24)