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January 15, 2025

Cayenne That Bad [ #Surprise25 ]

[TA Store. . .Inside, Front End.]

 

[ Returning from the lot, Maxx

cuts through the Aisles on his

way toward the back end.

 

Hidden behind dark shades, he

casually steps up to the meat

display, tapping it to get the

attendant’s attention. ]

 

“Geez, I think you sprayed quite

enough.  I can smell you from

across the counter.”

 

[ Ricky smiles, through fake coughing. ]

 

MAXX: Good, that was my point!

 

RICKY: I realized. So, have you

figured out what you’re going

to do for your bestie’s birthday?

 

MAXX: Not yet.  But you know

how much Scott went above and

beyond with his best man duties

last year.  You only turn 30 once

and I want to make sure this

night is special for him. 

 

RICKY: Yeah, and he’s been

single since Lisa moved away.

 

MAXX: He reminds me every day.

 

RICKY: Here’s a suggestion.  Instead of the

typical drinking based party, you could

try planning something more adult.

 

MAXX: Right.  What about a dressed up

dinner party? Imagine. Long, decorated

table with his closest friends around.

 

RICKY: I’m sure.  But where are we going

to organize something big like that at?


And in two days.

 

  [ Maxx shakes his head, silent. ]

 

“Afternoon, guys.”

 

[ They turn to see Erme walking past

them, heading to the back. ]

 

MAXX: That’s it! 

 

[ He states, already beaming with 

premature excitement. ]



: [TV Studio. . .3MS-Channel 7. ]

 

[ After wrapping up her midday on screen

report, Trailyn gathers her cards and walks

to station manager’s office. ]

 

         “Hello Sir, you wanted to see me?”        

 

SMNGR: Yes, take a seat please.

 

TRAILYN: This sounds serious.

 

SMNGR: No need for alarm.  I just wanted

to tell you that you’re doing a great job.

Especially getting us that follow up story

after that incident at TA.  You’re intuition

is something I haven’t seen at the station

in a long time.

 

TRAILYN: Thank you.  I’ve learned a lot

here over the last three years.  And that

is thanks to you and our amazing staff.

 

SMNGR: And speaking of.  You know Rita

Mendez, right?

 

TRAILYN: Of course.  She’s one of the debate

show host.

 

SMNGR: Well, she’s retiring from television

this month. And we wanted to offer you a

chance to replace her. 

 

TRAILYN: Wait, I’m no Rita. 

 

SMNGR: We don’t expect that. Look, our

viewers see you everyday on the news and

are already familiar with your personality.

This could be a very smooth transition for

you. 

 

Here’s some more information.  Take it,

read it over.  And if you’re interested,

you can sit in on a taping before you

decide. How does that sound?

 

[ Trailyn just stares at him, searching

for the words. ]


TRAILYN: Thank you, Sir.  Thanks so much!

 

[ She grabs the packet, exiting his office. ]

 


[Outside Scott’s. . .Two Days Later.]

 

[ Maxx & Brian are seen carrying a

blindfolded Scott & lightly tossing

him into the back seat. ]

 

“Whoa! I could have walked.”

 

MAXX: No way! And don’t take that

off, I want you to be surprised when

we get there. 

 

[ He gets in the drivers’ side with

Brian sitting next to him. ]

 

BRIAN: Let’s go!  We’re about

20 minutes away. 

 

[ Later, they arrive at Towne Ranch.

Maxx & Brian are leading Scott toward

a massive open barn with lights on.

 

Scott removes his blindfold seeing the

people sitting around the dinner table. ]

 

“SURPRISE!”

 

[ After being greeted, and everyone is

seated, Ricky takes over introduction. ]

 

RICKY: Scott.  This is Yazmyn and

Kira.  They work at Kutz.

 

SCOTT: Nice to meet you ladies.

 

So, what is on the menu for tonight?

 

[ He opens the cover over his plate. ]

 

ERME: It’s called beef wellington. 

 

[ Everyone starts to eat. ]

 

MAXX: And after dinner, Erme’s

going to take us for a ride through

the property. 

 

SCOTT: A ride?



[Café. . .Across From TA. ]

 

[ Trailyn joins her mother Monica

& her husband Kyle at an inside

table. ]

 

“Hey sweetie, how was work today?”

 

TRAILYN: Oh, it was pretty good

I’d say.  Considering this.

 

[ She hands Monica the contract

as she shuffles into the booth. ]

 

TRAILYN: I got a promotion!

 

MONICA: Congratulations!  I’m

so proud of you. 

 

KYLE: That’s awesome. So

what will you be doing now?

 

TRAILYN: You know Rita from

Debate Live.  They want me to

take her place.

 

KYLE: Wow, what a great opportunity!

This could be really good for your career.

 

MONICA: But what about the topics they

get into?  Sometimes it can be quite

controversial. 

 

TRAILYN: You raised a strong woman.  I

can handle it.

 

KYLE: Coming from someone who knows

about contracts, just make sure you go

over the whole thing with a fine tooth

comb.  You don’t want any surprises

later on.

 

[ A few hours later, Trailyn is home settling

down for the night.

 

Still sorting through the contract, she gets

to the back few pages.  Noticing names of

the host down the page, she examines

further, suddenly realizing she is holding

a very in depth typed-out script. ]

 

“Wait a minute”




[Towne Ranch. . .]

 

[ Everyone is following Erme’s horse who

has Yaz sitting close, up against his back,

with her gloved hands wrapped around

him.

 

Maxx & Ricky, Scott & Kira, and Brian

is riding alone. ]

 

SCOTT: Are you having fun?

 

KIRA: Yeah, this is great.  I’ve never

been on a horse before.  It’s smoother

than I would have guessed. 

 

YAZ: Your family’s property is beautiful.


I’d love to meet them sometime. 

 

[ She says as Erme get down, helping

her back to the ground.  He chooses

not to respond. ]

 

MAXX: Oh, I’ve got an idea!




 [ Back At Trailyn’s. . . ]

 

[ She is on the phone with Mairya,

getting her input on the promotion. ]

 

“How was the taping?”

 

TRAILYN: Very awkward.  I’ve been

watching the show since I started

there.  Who knew it was all fake

and the responses are guided.

 

MAIRYA: Yeah, that’s wild but

knowing how popular the reality

genre is today. I can’t say I’m

shocked.

 

TRAILYN: What do you think I

 should do? Not one of the hosts

mentioned any of it.  They just

acted like it was a normal thing.

 

MAIRYA: Well, it has been for 

them and for a long time.


If you want my opinion, you have

toiled at that station for three long

years.  You deserve this.  Especially

that raise! So just go for it. 

 

[ Trailyn takes a moment to respond. ]

 

TRAILYN: Yeah, you’re right.

 

I’m going to take it! 



[ Return To Towne Ranch. . .]

 

[ Scott is sat perched on his white stallion

with a determined look swept across his

face.

 

Erme is peering straight forward on the

right, focused on the ending gate.

 

& Maxx is in the middle ready to ride. ]

 

 

ERME: Just don’t take off too fast!

 

YAZ: Ready. . .SET. . .GO!

 

[ Erme & Maxx take off at a mid-speed,

keeping up with each other as Scott

trails a little behind.

 

Gaining ground, Maxx is getting close

to passing by Erme when a white

streak comes speeding past him.

 

Everyone is cheering on Scott as he gets

closer and closer to the fence. They expect

him to stop but instead see him hit hard,

falling down at the side of the horse. ]

 

“Scott! Are you okay?”

 

[ Erme yells to him, getting off while

everyone else is running to his side. ]


February 18, 2019

Plastic Dreams

( Starring Maxx /Kyle )



Saturday morning, TA.

[ Maxx dodges through clusters of
customers finally making his way
to the bakery counter.

He sees Scott sitting on a stool
towards the back and calls to
him. ]

MAXX: Must be nice to be the
only department not drowning
in a line.

And patience isn't any of
these people's virtue.

SCOTT: You're kidding me
right?  I can't keep anything
in the case.  And I'm the only
one here right now

First time i've sat down in
four hours.

MAXX: That's fucked up.  But
at least you don't smell like
funky ass fish.

[ He laughs a little. ]

SCOTT: Yeah.  I can't wait to
be on the beach.  Drinks in
hand and far away from
here.

Six more days!

[ Maxx doesn't respond
but instead is busy in his
phone scrolling through
Ricky's page. ]

SCOTT: You hear me?
MAXX: Yeah man.

[ Scott gets closer to him. ]

MAXX: Ricky sure is posting
a lot lately.  She didn't use
to be like that.
SCOTT: Your girlfriend is beau-
tiful.  What's the problem?

MAXX: Nothing.  As long as
that's all it is.

I'll see you later.  


At Monica & Kyle's house.

[ Caleb enters the front door &
sees Kyle sitting on the couch
in the living room. ]

"So what happened at work
yesturday?"

[ Caleb takes a seat across
from Kyle in a chair. ]

KYLE: Just got into it with the
boss again.  Another year 
and they are refusing to
give me a raise for all I
do at the gym.

CALEB: I figured that. As
nice as the place is.  Its
really nothing as long as
the company backing it is
crappy.
KYLE: Exactly. That's what
they fail to understand. Who
cares about the people and
the ones bringing in clients
everyday.

Hey. You want a beer?

[ Kyle springs up & walks
toward the kitchen. ]

CALEB: It's 11:30 in the 
morning.

KYLE: Don't act like you've
never day drank before.

Here.

[ Kyle sits close to him. ]

CALEB: Are you sure that's
a good idea?
KYLE: Why wouldn't it be?
We can chill here all day.

Uninterrupted.

[ Caleb wants to speak.  An intense
pressure builds up inside of him
but he ignores it.

Opting to take a drink instead. ]


Later that afternoon.

[ Maxx shuts off the steaming
stream of water as he stares 
down at the tub.

Shutting it off, he grabs a
towel & wraps it around his
waist.  Stepping out. ]

[ He joins Ricky in their bedroom. ]

MAXX: I like your hair babe.
How are Sascha and Tila
doing?
RICKY: They're fine.  I'm
just finalizing a few things
about our travel plans.

[ She shuts her laptop & joins
him on the bed.  ]

MAXX: We deserve it.  Did you 
see who made the top selling
department this month?
RICKY: I'm guessing it was meat.
MAXX: Ding ding ding.  it's
cuz we make the best team.

[ He kisses her on the cheek. ]

RICKY: You're so corny.  I need
to talk to you about something.

I made an appointment to see
a surgeon why were down
there.

MAXX: For what?

[ The atmosphere is shook as the
conversation suddenly gets serious. ]


Back At The Hasileda's.


KYLE: You keep hinting like
you want to talk about 
something.

What is it?

[ Kyle turns around looking
squarely at Caleb while
sitting down his beer
loudly. ]

CALEB: I think you need help.
KYLE: Oh please. That wasn't
what you were going to say.

[ Caleb stands up. ]

CALEB: You really don't remember
what went on the last time
you invited me here alone?

The state I found you in?

KYLE: Nothing happened.
CALEB: I'm not delusional.

You practically forced my
head down there.

[ Kyle is stunned. ]

CALEB: Just because you
forgot doesn't mean it
didn't happen.  

And the fact that you 
don't remember says
a lot.


At Ricky's & Maxx'.

MAXX: I understand that
certain procedures were 
necessary when you start-
ed.

But why more now?
Everyone says you look
amazing.

RICKY: I'm not feeling
completely myself just
yet and this is the reason.

[ She sits up.  Starring
at the mirror & locked
onto the middle of her
face. ]

MAXX: Well.  What all
is it going to take for
you to be there?

RICKY: Hey.  You don't
have to worry about
any of this. I'll be fine.
MAXX: You're acting like
its a normal thing to get
work done to yourself.

It's not!

RICKY: You're right.

[ She turns around
leaning her arms on Maxx'
chest & getting closer to
him. ]

RICKY: That's why this is
the last time.

[ She silences him with
continuous soft kisses. ]


Monica arrives home.

[ Walking down the hall
she hears loud voices coming
the living room area. ]

'You should just leave."

"Push me away. That's going
to solve everything."

"Why are you still here?"

[ Monica reaches the room
to see Kyle with rage in his
eyes heading toward Caleb. ]

MONICA: Hey.  What's with all
the yelling?

[ Kyle composes himself &
backs aways from Caleb. ]

KYLE: We we're just fucking
around.  Sorry.

[ He looks at Caleb & then
kisses Monica on the lips
and hugs on to her. ]

CALEB: Yeah.  I better go.

You two have some
catching up to do.

[ He smirks at Kyle on his
way out of the door. ]




                                                                   ( Updated 10/24 )