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March 5, 2025

Before The Finale: Dismantled [ #Surprise25 ]

 

[ The Café . . .Across From TA. ]

[ Jeszyca, Amber, & Tiesun are deep
into conversation on their lunch. ]

JESZYCA: So, how is Ava doing?

AMBER: She’s been fine for the last
few days. Her doctor started her on
some new medication so we’re just
hoping that it helps.

On the other hand, I’m pretty sure my
3rd grader has a crush on someone. But
he won’t tell me who, of course.  

TIESUN: Really, isn’t he friends with
Mila?

Wouldn’t it be wild if it was her?   

JESZYCA: Stuu’s daughter?  

TIESUN: Yeah.

AMBER: She’s about to graduate this
year.  I doubt it.  

JESZYCA: I mean, you’re one to talk.
Hello! Your husband is much older. 

Maybe it runs in the family.  

[ Amber grabs a roll off the table
and tosses it at her but she catches
it. ]

JESZYCA: Anyway, switching gears.

Who is that guy I saw walking you
to your car the other night?

TIESUN: That was Rediki.  He’s a new
hire.  

And it’s a very, long story. 

[ They both look at Tiesun, intrigued. ]

JESZYCA: Go on then.  We’ve got time. 


[ Attica Elementary School . . .Cafeteria Area. ]

[ Dibur is nervously sitting at the table,
staring across the room when two of
his buddies sit down next to him. ]

“Who are you looking at?”

DIBUR: No one.

JOEY: He likes Mila and is too
much of a baby to tell her.

[ The other guys laugh. ]

DIBUR: I am not! I’m telling her
today.

[ He states, frustrated and chewing
on his pizza slice. ]

BRODIE: Just go over there and
ask her out right now.  Before
someone else does.

JOEY: If you’re not scared.  

[ Dibur sighs, getting up from his seat.
Finding Mila at a table with her best 
friend Xalia he stops. ]

DIBUR: Hey.

[ He smiles big at Mila. ]

MILA: What’ s up?

DIBUR: Would you like to
go out with me?

MILA: Sure.  We hang out all
the time.  

[ Dibur looks away. ]

XALIA: I think he’s asking you
to be his girlfriend.  

[ She starts to cackle, knocking
over her drink. ]

MILA: Seriously?

[ She questions but can tell from Dibur’s
expression what he means. ]

MILA: I’m sorry.  I can’t.  

[ Dibur turns around, turning red &
taking off out of the room. ]


[ Towne Ranch . . .Near The Stables. ]

[ Erme is walking toward the barn eager
to start his normal task, when he is met
by his father and an unknown male. ]

ERME: Hey Dad, who is this?

MERRILTOWNE: This is Pablo Saint John.

I hired him to keep an eye on the horses.

ERME: Okay, but I do that.  

MERRILTOWNE: Why don’t you go have
a look around, so you can get used to the 
property?  I’ll be back with you in a bit.

[ The stranger leaves and he continues. ]

MERRILTOWNE: Not anymore!

Your manager called me yesterday.

ERME: What about?

MERRILTOWNE: I don’t even want to
voice this.  But have you been screwing
around with the animals?

ERME: No Dad!  I could never.

MERRILTOWNE: You’re lying Ermensau,
I can always tell. You need help and until
you get it you won’t be allowed back here.


ERME: Mark would never do this to me.

Who called you?

[ His Dad ignores the question. ]

MERRILTOWNE: Just go back to the house!

I have business to attend to.  

[ He looks at Erme with anger and disappoint
-ment streaked across his face. ]


[ Amber & Dyminic’s . . .Later That Day. ]

[ Dyminic is sitting in his office when
he sees his son appear in the doorway. ]

“Hey, you we’re quiet at dinner.  

Is something going on?”

DIBUR: I don’t want to go back
to school.  Ever.

DYMINIC: Okay. . .Why?

DIBUR: I asked out this girl.

And she said no. Everyone
made fun of me.

DYMINIC: I’m sorry.  Was she older
than you?

DIBUR: It was Mila.

DYMINIC: I see.  Well, you are way too 
young to be even thinking about dating,
Mr.  

Focus right now on school, your
friends and your sports.  

DIBUR: But I really like her.

DYMINIC: I know but you have
to settle on just being her friend.

 Don’t worry. When you’re ready. . .



[ The 3Ms Airport . . .On The Plane. ]

[ After heaving their luggage into place,
Jeszyca & Sunshine sit relaxed in their
first class seats. ]

JESZYCA: I have a surprise for you.

SUNSHINE: Another one?  As if the
spontaneous weekend trip wasn’t
enough.  

[ She hands her girlfriend an envelope
adorned in fancy letters spelling out
her full name. ]

JESZYCA: It’s from TA Corporate.  

Do you know what this means?

SUNSHINE: I’m getting the can?

JESZYCA: No.  Just open it.  

[ She peels the sticker back, revealing
the invitation. ]

“ You And A Guest Are Invited To
Our Annual Milestone Awards. . .

NOMINEE: Manager Of The Year. “

SUNSHINE: Oh my God!  This isn’t real.

JESZYCA: Are you kidding me?  It was
your idea to open on Saturday’s.  Plus how
Care’s client based has increased over the
past year.  They would be insane to not
nominate you.  

SUNSHINE: Yeah, but I’m up against Mark
and that Mirror manager.  They get nominated
ever year.  

JESZYCA: Oh well.  Just lay back and relax.

When we get to beach.  We’re celebrating.


[ Attica Elementary School . . .The Next Day. ]

[ Dibur arrives at school, looking for his
friends when he notices Brodie down the
 hall perched by a window with Mila. ]

[ Seeing them laughing & sitting close
insights his rage, as Dibur picks up his
pace toward them. ]

JOEY: Hey, what are you doing?

[ He calls to Dibur as he walks past.
Eyes set on Brodie. 

Reaching them now, he pushes Brodie
knocking him back into a plant fixture. ]

BRODIE: What is your problem?

[ He shouts, standing up but Dibur stays
silent.  Teasing him with his fist. ]

MILA: Enough!  

[ Joey runs up grabbing Dibur from
behind and pulling him in the other
direction. 

Mila walks away with her arm around
Brodie, guiding him to the office. ]


[ Back At Towne Ranch . . . ]

[ Erme sneaks down to the Stables. On
a mission after everyone at home is 
sleeping. ]

He attempts to open the door, not noticing
the locks that have been installed. ]


[ Erme let’s out a howling yell of defeat.
Kicking the doors, over and over again. 

Eventually, falling to the ground with 
tears streaming down his face. ]


[ Ocean Beach, CA . . . ]

[ After lounging in the sand all day,
Jeszyca & Sunshine are sitting at
a fancy dining table talking over
food and glasses of wine. ]

“This has been amazing!”

[ She gleams, kissing Jeszyca on
the cheek. ]


SUNSHINE: It is.  And it was exactly
what I needed. Thank you.

JESZYCA: We’ve been through so much
over the last six years but I feel like all
of it has just made us stronger as a couple.

And that’s why I wanted to know if.

[ She stands.  On her knees in front of 
Sunshine now, she presents her with
a diamond ring. ]

“Will You Marry Me?”


[ Meanwhile . . .At Syria & Hahn’s. ]

SYRIA: Mark’s on the porch.  He said
he needs to talk to you.

HAHN: Okay?  Since when does our
manager make house calls at night?

[ He joins Mark outside. ]

HAHN: Are you here to congratulate
me on my 'AM Of The Year' nom?  

MARK: Not exactly.  I’m here to ask
you if you were the one who contacted
Erme’s parents.

[ Hahn freezes for a second. ]

HAHN: They needed to know.  It could
have affected their business.

MARK: I told you to stay out of it!  

Either way, it wasn’t your place.

HAHN: I’m sorry, Mark.  At least now
he is getting the help that he clearly
needs.

I did that kid a favor.

MARK: No, I’m sorry Hahn.  This wasn’t
the right way.  

And you’re fired! Don’t come back to TA.  

[ Mark drives off, leaving Hahn trembling
with wrath. ]


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March 1, 2016

Lights, Cam, Distraction!

scene one:
Late afternoon, MS Prep school.

[ Freshmen Little H & his junior 
co-host are finalizing spots 
for the weekend's talent 
show in the auditorium. ]

LITTLE H: Sorry for the short
warning everyone but the prin-
cipal is demanding to see each
act before the show now.  

[ The performer's reactions vary
 from surprise to annoyance
as a camera guy arrives,
facing the stage. ]

JR. DEAN: We'll go in order.  We
should be able to knock this
 thing out pretty quickly guys.
LITTLE H: Yeah.  Just like we planned
out but will skip the opening.

[ H notices Dean's glance toward
the aisle & Caleb comes into
view. ]

LITTLE H: Give me five.  Okay.


[ In the waiting area. ]

CALEB: Everything looks set.  I'm
guessing you didn't watch the
video I sent you.
LITTLE H: I've been busy.  And
you know what we agreed on.
CALEB: What? I just got off two
months of being watched.  I just
wanted to do something with our
other friends. Sounded cool.

[ H backs aways from him. ]

LITTLE H: This isn't what I meant
when I asked for space.  This show
is my thing.  I brought it to life.

And you just can't be involved
for my sake.  I'm sorry.  

[ He leaves Caleb standing
in the hall. ]


scene two:
Following day, Dym & Am's.

[ Amber steps downstairs, grab-
ing her jacket from a chair in
the front room.

She quickly notices her hus-
band's glare from the couch. ]

"Why are you looking at me
like that?"

DYMINIC: Simply cause you're
beautiful.

[ He perks his lips in a seduc-
tive manner but Amber isn't
fazed. ]

AMBER: You have no idea 
what tonight is.  Do you? It's
on your office schedule.  
DYMINIC: Okay.  The one I
never look at.

[ Amber shakes her head. ]

AMBER: I'm going to brunch with
Ski & Hithe.  Are you still 
meeting me at the school later?

[ Dyminic nods. ]

AMBER: Good.  See you then.

[ She kisses her man before
scooting out the door. ]


scene three: 
Evening, outside Zain's.

[ Zain, Tiesun, & Baby Mila
are sitting on the porch
watching the sunset. ]

"We should probably get you
ready soon little girl."

ZAIN: Yup.  One thing Stuu
hates is waiting around.
TIESUN: Daddies impatient.

[ Mila smiles, then throws
her bottle toward the wall. ]

ZAIN: Hey!

[ He catches it & she makes
a face. Zain hands it back. ]

TIESUN: What were you try-
ing to tell me earlier?
ZAIN: Nothing serious.  Just
Jazpur again.
TIESUN: He having family
problems?

ZAIN: Yes.  I knew he should-
've moved out and away like
I did. 
TIESUN: So not only is he deal-
ing with random family but
also crazy fans.

ZAIN: And there's a bigger issue.

[ The doorbell rings.  Mila runs
toward it & Zain gets up. ]


ZAIN: He wants to come here.


scene four:
That night, MS Prep.

[ Little H is dressed in his bright
pink tuxedo when Mairya arrives
in a white dress. ]

"Should we practice the opening?"

[ H grabs her hand and Mairya
twirls around. ]

LITTLE H: I think we're solid.

Let's talk instead.

[ They take seats in the empty
auditorium. ]

MAIRYA: I know you're not ner-
vous.

[ H shakes his head. ]

MAIRYA: Then it's Caleb.  It's
always Caleb.

[ He looks serious. ]

LITTLE H: It's not.  Someone
made a move on me.  Some-
one else and I don't think they.

[ They both turn around as H's
co-host enters the room. ]

JR. DEAN: Is everyone excited?

I know I am!

[ Mairya leaves & H looks away,
pretending to be busy. ]


scene five :
A couple hours earlier.

[ Amber, Hithe, & Ski are dining
at a mixed meal buffet before
heading to the show. ]

"Is Mr. Jones getting demanding?"

SKI: Right I mean.  Syria did kind
of warn you.  

[ Ski snickers & Hithe starts to laugh
but Amber waves her fork at them. ]

AMBER: Not at all.  He just doesn't
remember everything I plan.

Dyminic knows we need to do
our own things.  In fact, he's 
taking time out from his cases
to explore some other hobbies.

HITHE: That's cool.  Like what?
AMBER: Uh.  He won't say yet.

SKI: So there's secrets.

[ Ski makes a questioning face. ]

AMBER: I'm sure I'll find out when
the time is right.  So did little Jai
finally pick a song?
SKI: They're doing Little Mix.
AMBER: The new one?  I love it.

[ Hithe starts to hum the melody. ]

AMBER: Can't wait to see H dance
too.

[ She looks down at her phone. ]

AMBER: And guess what.  Dyminic
cancelled.  



scene six:
Back in the auditorium.

[ After the opening, the crowd
is clapping while Mairya exits
the stage.

Little H joins Dean at the mic. ]

"Good evening and thank you
for joining us."

LITTLE H: Its their first year
but they're already making
a mark in Senior Show Choir.

To start us off Trailyn & Jai 
Simon.

[ The rooms goes dark as a tall
curtain begins to lift from the
ceiling.

Trailyn unfreezes from her pose
& starts to sing. ]

TRAILYN: When you hold me in
the street.  And you kiss me on
the dance floor.

[ Everyone starts to clap as Jai
steps out, taking over the lyrics. 

Little H is watching from back-
stage when Dean decides to
grab onto him.  Pulling H out
of view. ]

DEAN: When I said this was
exciting.  Did you know what
 I really meant?

[ H looks down & back up fast
as Dean's hand leads him to the
visible proof.

His speech is stunned as
Dean sits there stroking 
through his pants. ]

JAI: Guys.  We're done.

Oh wow.  What the?

[ Dean looks around, adjust his-
self and heads for the stage.

Leaving H, Trailyn, & Jai struck
by his nerve. ]


scene seven:

[ Amber arrives at home after
a full day to find an over excited
Dyminic waiting for her. ]

"Gee.  How much coffee have
you had?"

DYMINIC: Just a few cups. Or 
four.

[ Amber shakes her head. ]

DYMINIC: Anyway, I just got off
the phone with a buddy of mine.

I finally figured out what I'm 
going to do while I'm taking
some time off.  
AMBER: And what's that?

DYMINIC: I'll give you a hint.

You know how much I love
to ride.

[ He begins to "neigh" at Amber
until she hits him with a pillow. ]




September 10, 2014

Catch Up With TA . . . . .Lorenzo!



Lorenzo was introduced in episode 'Take A Hit 1' when Karie brought him in to help at the Salon event.  He was hired on after that and has spent the summer trying to sway the bad opinions of manager Ace & Hithe.

This Fall . . . . .He Returns!


Dina is extra interested in what happened at Hithe's party:
 http://smarturl.co/107

Kristyn can't seem to connect with her husband:
http://smarturl.co/111

Mark & Ski have words over Weis:
http://smarturl.co/204

Guess whose back in Magic Springs . . . . . :
http://smarturl.co/208

Ski notices a different side to Mark:
http://smarturl.co/209


 F2A: Preview 1 . . . . .

December 31, 2009

201 PSYCHO [ SEASON PREMIERE ]

( Twisted&Tragic/#3 )

'Get away from me…now!'




HUSBAND: What?

You need to calm down.

Remember what happened the last time?

KRISTYN: Stop telling me what to do!

HUSBAND: Something's wrong with you…

You're getting all these mood swings

and you're just not the same anymore

KRISTYN: Yeah, and do you have any idea

why I'm like this? [ pauses for a second ]

. . .It's you!

HUSBAND: Me? What have I done???

KRISTYN: You're always stressing me out

and bothering me with dumb, unimportant shit

that doesn't matter!

HUSBAND: Well, I'm sorry…

I didn't realize it was so annoying for me

to show concern for my own wife!



[ Kristyn stares at him then turns away ]



HUSBAND: I'm going to pick up our kids

from school…

Remember them? Or are they just another

cramp in your style these days.


[ Turns around and the door slams as he leaves ]





[ At TA Amber, Monica, and Dina are working

when Mark comes up with a new girl. ]



MARK: Morning everyone…

This is our new night cashier Jeszyca

JESZYCA: Hi

MARK: She'll be starting in a few weeks

...Amber can you show her around for me?

AMBER: OK

MARK: Thanks, I appreciate it [ He leaves ]



JESZYCA: So, is this where I'll be working?

AMBER: Yeah, I guess they're only running

the self checkouts at night…

They haven't told us much

JESZYCA: OK, that makes sense…

Is this easy to learn?

AMBER: Yeah...

All you really have to do is watch

and if someone is stuck you'll see a light over

their lane

JESZYCA: Wow, that's it?

It's must getting pretty boring.[ smiles ]

AMBER: Boring? Oh, no... Trust me

there's always something interesting

going on around here

JESZYCA: Well, that's good!

Thanks for helping me Amber. . .

Maybe I'll see you around



[ Amber looks up & sees Jeszyca looking right at her ]





[ At TA's checkout lanes. ]



MONICA: So, it's true…

We are going 24 hours soon

DINA: Yeah, were going to have a whole new shift

and we don't even have a manager for this one

MONICA: Well, I'm sure we're getting one soon…

I mean, Mark is so busy with hiring new

people right now

DINA: I guess, but it's been over a week

and it's not even been mentioned

MONICA: There's nothing we can do about it

but wait and see



[ A customer comes into Monica's lane. ]



MONICA: Morning…

Did you find everything you were

looking for today?





[ Back at Kristyn's/ Sitting on the couch she's shaking

trying to calm down and her husband comes in ]



[ stands up ] KRISTYN: Hi

HUSBAND: Hey…

KRISTYN: Where are the kids?

HUSBAND: I thought it would be better

if they went to my mom's for the night

KRISTYN: Oh



[ Her husband starts to go upstairs… ]



KRISTYN: Wait…

I'm sorry OK

HUSBAND: Yeah OK

KRISTYN: Seriously, I couldn't help myself

. . .I just lost control

HUSBAND: I know, but this isn't normal Kristyn

It has to be something else going on...

KRISTYN: Well, I don't need any help

I'll just deal with it on my own

HUSBAND: Are you sure?

KRISTYN: I promise



[ Kristyn's cell rings/ She sees it's Hithe

and ignores it ]



HUSBAND: Who was that?

KRISTYN: Just work…I'll call back later

Let's go upstairs and relax

HUSBAND: Alright





[ At Hithe's apartment someone knocks on the door. ]



HITHE: Hey, I didn't think you would show…

SKI: Yeah, well I wanted to check

and see how you we're doing

. . .So what are you doing?

HITHE: Not much, just watching a movie



[ They walk into the living room. ]


SKI: Damn! What you do?

Jack a liquor store...

HITHE: Not hardly! [ laughs ]

...No, I'm just taking some time to enjoy myself

SKI: Yeah, I can see that…

So what about work?

HITHE: I don't know…

I haven't really thought about it [ opens a beer ]

SKI: What?

HITHE: I mean, in another week I'll get myself

together and start looking…

But right now I'm just gonna take it easy

SKI: Well, it's won't be real easy when you're

stretched out on the street somewhere

HITHE: Huh? Don't worry, I'm fine…

SKI: And what about Kristyn?

HITHE: She won't even call me…

SKI: Well, I imagine it's hard to call you

with her husband's being right there

and he seems very protective to me

HITHE: I guess…

But it seems like one minute she wants me

around and the next minute she doesn't

SKI: Yeah, I know

HITHE: Oh well [ looks down ]

SKI: So this is really what you do all day?

Sit around in your underwear and watch TV. . .

HITHE: Yeah, pretty much! [ laughs ]



SKI: Well, I have to leave and get Weis soon

HITHE: OK, thanks for coming by Ski…

Maybe we can go out some night soon

SKI: Yeah, maybe…





[ Back at the store/ In the break room. ]







AMBER: Man, we're so busy today!



MONICA: I know, this is the first break



I've had since I got here



AMBER: Me too



and we only have a few hours left



MONICA: So, you hear from Hithe lately



How is he doing?



AMBER: Fine, I guess…



But he's not really doing anything



MONICA: Really?



AMBER: Yeah, getting fired has 



messed with him



MONICA: Aww, that's too bad



Well, tell him I said 'Hi' when you see him



again



AMBER: OK, I will…





[ Monica walks out and Mark bumps into her. ]



MARK: Oops, sorry Monica.

MONICA: It's OK…

Uh, are you alright?

MARK: Yeah, just been doing interviews

and trying to balance everything else



[ They start walking to the front. ]



MONICA: Wow.

Sounds like you need some help…

MARK: Yeah, I need a lot of it. . .

and I'm having problems finding a new manager

. . .Things are really hectic rite now!

MONICA: Yeah, I know…



[ Monica starts walking back to her lane/

Suddenly someone in a black hoodie runs right

passed them. ]



MARK: Hey, slow down! [ sees something in his hand ]



[ Mark runs outside and grabs a hold of him. ]



MARK: Drop the shit or I'll drop you!



[ The man throws the food and as he turns around for a

second his hood falls down/ Mark bends down to pick up

the groceries then turns around and Monica's standing there. ]



MARK: Can you believe that?  Man!



[ Monica's still standing there in silence. ]



MARK: Uh, Monica?

[ snaps out of it ] MONICA: Yeah. . .

No, I can't believe that.

Some people are just really desperate, I guess

. . .You OK?

MARK: Yeah, let's get back inside





[ Her husband is awake and Kristyn is turned over/ He slowly

gets down and picks up her cell phone off the nightstand ]



KRISTYN: Where you going? [ turns around ]

HUSBAND: Nowhere, I was just…

KRISTYN: Wait, what are you doing?

HUSBAND: Just using your phone…

I can't find mine

KRISTYN: Yours is right over there on the dresser

Did you look at all? [ takes it back ]

Uh, why were you in the call log?

HUSBAND: Well, I was just…

KRISTYN: Just what?

HUSBAND: Why is Hithe calling you so much?

KRISTYN: I don't know

HUSBAND: Well, how come you didn't

answer it earlier?

KRISTYN: I didn't wanna talk. . .

But you shouldn't have had my phone

to begin with [ gets up ]

HUSBAND: Where you going?

KRISTYN: I'm going out…

I need to be away from you 

HUSBAND: No!

KRISTYN: What? You can't stop me…

HUSBAND: We're gonna sit down and talk about this!

…Why can't you just be honest with me?

KRISTYN: There's nothing to be honest about…

HUSBAND: I'm not stupid, Kristyn!

You know what I think?

I think, you've been sneaking around behind my back

KRISTYN: Well, you can keep thinking that…

I'm leaving



[ Her husband grabs her hand & she turns around ]



HUSBAND: Kristyn, wait!

Please….let's just sit down

KRISTYN: I said, NO!



[ She smacks him in the face & pushes him off of her/

Falling to the floor he hits his head on the nightstand ]





[ Kristyn stands there in shock as he just lays there

still on the floor. ]




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