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January 15, 2025

Cayenne That Bad [ #Surprise25 ]

[TA Store. . .Inside, Front End.]

 

[ Returning from the lot, Maxx

cuts through the Aisles on his

way toward the back end.

 

Hidden behind dark shades, he

casually steps up to the meat

display, tapping it to get the

attendant’s attention. ]

 

“Geez, I think you sprayed quite

enough.  I can smell you from

across the counter.”

 

[ Ricky smiles, through fake coughing. ]

 

MAXX: Good, that was my point!

 

RICKY: I realized. So, have you

figured out what you’re going

to do for your bestie’s birthday?

 

MAXX: Not yet.  But you know

how much Scott went above and

beyond with his best man duties

last year.  You only turn 30 once

and I want to make sure this

night is special for him. 

 

RICKY: Yeah, and he’s been

single since Lisa moved away.

 

MAXX: He reminds me every day.

 

RICKY: Here’s a suggestion.  Instead of the

typical drinking based party, you could

try planning something more adult.

 

MAXX: Right.  What about a dressed up

dinner party? Imagine. Long, decorated

table with his closest friends around.

 

RICKY: I’m sure.  But where are we going

to organize something big like that at?


And in two days.

 

  [ Maxx shakes his head, silent. ]

 

“Afternoon, guys.”

 

[ They turn to see Erme walking past

them, heading to the back. ]

 

MAXX: That’s it! 

 

[ He states, already beaming with 

premature excitement. ]



: [TV Studio. . .3MS-Channel 7. ]

 

[ After wrapping up her midday on screen

report, Trailyn gathers her cards and walks

to station manager’s office. ]

 

         “Hello Sir, you wanted to see me?”        

 

SMNGR: Yes, take a seat please.

 

TRAILYN: This sounds serious.

 

SMNGR: No need for alarm.  I just wanted

to tell you that you’re doing a great job.

Especially getting us that follow up story

after that incident at TA.  You’re intuition

is something I haven’t seen at the station

in a long time.

 

TRAILYN: Thank you.  I’ve learned a lot

here over the last three years.  And that

is thanks to you and our amazing staff.

 

SMNGR: And speaking of.  You know Rita

Mendez, right?

 

TRAILYN: Of course.  She’s one of the debate

show host.

 

SMNGR: Well, she’s retiring from television

this month. And we wanted to offer you a

chance to replace her. 

 

TRAILYN: Wait, I’m no Rita. 

 

SMNGR: We don’t expect that. Look, our

viewers see you everyday on the news and

are already familiar with your personality.

This could be a very smooth transition for

you. 

 

Here’s some more information.  Take it,

read it over.  And if you’re interested,

you can sit in on a taping before you

decide. How does that sound?

 

[ Trailyn just stares at him, searching

for the words. ]


TRAILYN: Thank you, Sir.  Thanks so much!

 

[ She grabs the packet, exiting his office. ]

 


[Outside Scott’s. . .Two Days Later.]

 

[ Maxx & Brian are seen carrying a

blindfolded Scott & lightly tossing

him into the back seat. ]

 

“Whoa! I could have walked.”

 

MAXX: No way! And don’t take that

off, I want you to be surprised when

we get there. 

 

[ He gets in the drivers’ side with

Brian sitting next to him. ]

 

BRIAN: Let’s go!  We’re about

20 minutes away. 

 

[ Later, they arrive at Towne Ranch.

Maxx & Brian are leading Scott toward

a massive open barn with lights on.

 

Scott removes his blindfold seeing the

people sitting around the dinner table. ]

 

“SURPRISE!”

 

[ After being greeted, and everyone is

seated, Ricky takes over introduction. ]

 

RICKY: Scott.  This is Yazmyn and

Kira.  They work at Kutz.

 

SCOTT: Nice to meet you ladies.

 

So, what is on the menu for tonight?

 

[ He opens the cover over his plate. ]

 

ERME: It’s called beef wellington. 

 

[ Everyone starts to eat. ]

 

MAXX: And after dinner, Erme’s

going to take us for a ride through

the property. 

 

SCOTT: A ride?



[Café. . .Across From TA. ]

 

[ Trailyn joins her mother Monica

& her husband Kyle at an inside

table. ]

 

“Hey sweetie, how was work today?”

 

TRAILYN: Oh, it was pretty good

I’d say.  Considering this.

 

[ She hands Monica the contract

as she shuffles into the booth. ]

 

TRAILYN: I got a promotion!

 

MONICA: Congratulations!  I’m

so proud of you. 

 

KYLE: That’s awesome. So

what will you be doing now?

 

TRAILYN: You know Rita from

Debate Live.  They want me to

take her place.

 

KYLE: Wow, what a great opportunity!

This could be really good for your career.

 

MONICA: But what about the topics they

get into?  Sometimes it can be quite

controversial. 

 

TRAILYN: You raised a strong woman.  I

can handle it.

 

KYLE: Coming from someone who knows

about contracts, just make sure you go

over the whole thing with a fine tooth

comb.  You don’t want any surprises

later on.

 

[ A few hours later, Trailyn is home settling

down for the night.

 

Still sorting through the contract, she gets

to the back few pages.  Noticing names of

the host down the page, she examines

further, suddenly realizing she is holding

a very in depth typed-out script. ]

 

“Wait a minute”




[Towne Ranch. . .]

 

[ Everyone is following Erme’s horse who

has Yaz sitting close, up against his back,

with her gloved hands wrapped around

him.

 

Maxx & Ricky, Scott & Kira, and Brian

is riding alone. ]

 

SCOTT: Are you having fun?

 

KIRA: Yeah, this is great.  I’ve never

been on a horse before.  It’s smoother

than I would have guessed. 

 

YAZ: Your family’s property is beautiful.


I’d love to meet them sometime. 

 

[ She says as Erme get down, helping

her back to the ground.  He chooses

not to respond. ]

 

MAXX: Oh, I’ve got an idea!




 [ Back At Trailyn’s. . . ]

 

[ She is on the phone with Mairya,

getting her input on the promotion. ]

 

“How was the taping?”

 

TRAILYN: Very awkward.  I’ve been

watching the show since I started

there.  Who knew it was all fake

and the responses are guided.

 

MAIRYA: Yeah, that’s wild but

knowing how popular the reality

genre is today. I can’t say I’m

shocked.

 

TRAILYN: What do you think I

 should do? Not one of the hosts

mentioned any of it.  They just

acted like it was a normal thing.

 

MAIRYA: Well, it has been for 

them and for a long time.


If you want my opinion, you have

toiled at that station for three long

years.  You deserve this.  Especially

that raise! So just go for it. 

 

[ Trailyn takes a moment to respond. ]

 

TRAILYN: Yeah, you’re right.

 

I’m going to take it! 



[ Return To Towne Ranch. . .]

 

[ Scott is sat perched on his white stallion

with a determined look swept across his

face.

 

Erme is peering straight forward on the

right, focused on the ending gate.

 

& Maxx is in the middle ready to ride. ]

 

 

ERME: Just don’t take off too fast!

 

YAZ: Ready. . .SET. . .GO!

 

[ Erme & Maxx take off at a mid-speed,

keeping up with each other as Scott

trails a little behind.

 

Gaining ground, Maxx is getting close

to passing by Erme when a white

streak comes speeding past him.

 

Everyone is cheering on Scott as he gets

closer and closer to the fence. They expect

him to stop but instead see him hit hard,

falling down at the side of the horse. ]

 

“Scott! Are you okay?”

 

[ Erme yells to him, getting off while

everyone else is running to his side. ]


February 26, 2014

Stumble On

SCENE 1:

[ Kyle arrives at Marty’s.
Seeing his friend sprawled
out on the couch he takes
a seat across. ]

KYLE: Sorry about the fall.
How long are you out
for?
MARTY: At least another week.
KYLE: Oh, that’s not too
bad.

[ Marty attempts to sit up
but pain in his leg holds
him back. ]

MARTY: Not too bad?  They’re
probably looking for my
replacement as we speak.
KYLE: Come on.  Think of it
as a break.  A much needed
one if you ask me.  

Anyway, you should be
healed just in time for
the wedding rehearsal.

[ Kyle notices Marty’s
expression. ]

KYLE: I know you don’t
think we’re ready but
 I’m glad you put that
aside to be my best man
MARTY:  Yeah, I’ll be there.
I’m just concerned.

Without my career, who
am I?




SCENE 2:


[ Holding a bag, Tiesun gets
into a parked truck. ]

STUU: Hey Tie.  Please tell
me your months of hard
work finally paid off.

[ He gives her a big smile. ]

TIESUN: Not quite.  I didn’t
get in.

[ Stuu looks surprised. ]

Let’s go.  We should crash
before work tonight.

STUU: Sure thing.  And look,
I’m not trying to be funny
or anything.  But I noticed
a theme to the girls who
were leaving the dance
hall.

All of the ones who looked
happy we’re white.
TIESUN: Maybe but I’m the
last person to try and use
the race card.

I’m just going to accept
that it’s over.  There will
be other chances. 


SCENE 3:


[ Marty & Kyle are still
talking. ]

KYLE: Well amigo.  I should
head out.  Text me.

I know you want to get
through your injury without
the pain medicine.  Just leave
those bad friends from our
past alone.  Okay?

See ya.

[ Kyle exits.  As soon as
Marty hears him walking
out, he lets out a loud
yell.

He quickly bites down on
the pillow in his hand to
stop the sound. ]

MARTY: I just need some
thing.

[ Anxious, he leans backs.
Turning on the TV, he tries
to get comfortable with
this new distraction. ]


SCENE 4:
Before night shift at TA.

[ Airynn, Larrie, Joh, Stuu
& Tiesun are listening to
Ski’s meeting. ]

SKI: I just wanted to remind
everyone to keep offering
the TA credit to customers.

The stats right now are 120
days,  90 nights, and 40 salon.
Let’s put in a little more
effort this week so we
can pass up Mark.  Okay?

[ Everyone is heading to
start but Tiesun & Stuu
stay behind.

Stuu starts to play a song
on his phone. ]

TIESUN: Turn it down before
Ski comes back. 
STUU: I’m trying to tell you
something.
It’s the song we danced
to in the fake frat video.
TIESUN: Yeah, and?

STUU: Well, they’re holding
another day of auditions
tomorrow, right?
TIESUN: Yes.
STUU: I have an idea.
That’s gonna prove my
point. 

Wait until break.


SCENE 5:

[ Marty is sitting in the dark
reading an article online on
his laptop. ]

‘The effects can be amazing
and at the same time quite
aggravating.”

[ Suddenly Marty is startled
by a phone call.

Seeing that it is Kyle, he
continues to read on. ]


[ As he finishes the article,
he reaches for his crutches
so he can prepare to hop
towards the bathroom.

Leaning now, he feels a
weight shift and forces
through to take his first
step. ]

[ Marty sighs. ]

MARTY: There has to
be an easier way.



SCENE 6:
The next morning.

[ Stuu is leading Tiesun
inside a building.  She is in full
costume with a decorated scarf
over her face & long gloves.

After waiting in a room for
a couple hours, they are
called into the performance
area. ]


[ Without a word, Tiesun leads
Stuu in a dance they had only
performed once before in an
online video.

Surprising himself. Stuu did all
the moves serving as her
background. ]

[ Waiting for the decision, Tiesun
can’t look but Stuu stays staring
at the judges. ]

“We decided.  Your through!”

[ The judges start to applaud.

  Tiesun removes the face
covering as they stop
clapping one by one. ]


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(Updated 11/24)