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August 14, 2013

" Mister What-Not "

SCENE 1
Morning, at TA Salon.

[ Karie is finishing up Larrie’s
cut. ]

“Yeah, thankfully I didn’t have
to bail Jess out of jail the
other night.  She just
got a trespassing ticket.”




KARIE: Wow.  Can’t say she
doesn’t have balls.  Don’t
know what I’ve would
have done if people we’re
stealing my money.   

[ She removes his cover, &
they walk toward the back
for a shampoo.  Karie notices
Sascha doing some cleaning. ]

SASCHA: Seems like Ace has been
gone all day.  Is something
wrong?
KARIE: He’s here.  Just locked in his
office.
SASCHA: That’s weird.  Normally he’s
at the desk or talking to clients. 

[ Larrie is sitting, listening. . . ]

[ After paying at the counter with
Hithe, Larrie goes to the back to
visit his cousin.

Seeing the door is propped, he
knocks on it but instead it comes
flying open.  Ace is gone and
a note is left on his desk.

‘Going home.  Love, Ace’


SCENE 2
Meanwhile, inside TA store.

[ Hahn is talking to Syria in front
of her lane. ]

HAHN: Yeah, you should check
out that movie soon.
Twists around every
corner.  Wicked stuff. 
SYRIA: Thanks, I will.

[ She gives him a friendly smile
before returning to work. ]

[ Hahn checks the time on his
watch & goes outside to wait
on a new arrival.

In the middle lot, Amber &
Ski are sitting & eating lunch. ]

AMBER: We should do this
more often.  Too bad Hithe
couldn’t join.
SKI: I know.  Last night was
crazy!  Imagine my short ass
trying to peel Mark off of
Chais.  He was trying to old
school whip him, belt to skin.
  

AMBER: So, he was the thief.
SKI: Yup, him and his best friend.

I’m like, Mark you can’t do that
anymore.

Then I grounded Chais.


SCENE 3:
Back at the Salon.

[ Karie is reading her text &
and she starts to think, when
Sascha comes in. ]

SASCHA: And now we’re slow.

You're in a good mood. What
changed?
KARIE: I think I know why Ace
has been so hush hush lately.

He’s nervous about asking me
to marry him. 
I mean, we’ve been going out
for nine months.  

We've met each other's
 families already. 
Even talk about kids.  
SASCHA: But what if your wrong
and it’s something else?
KARIE: Like what?
SASCHA: I don’t know but I’m
sure there’s a reason he hasn’t
spilled.
KARIE: Whatever, it is.  I’ll find
out tonight. 


SCENE 4:

[ Hahn sees new bagger Jenni
come in & he immediately
approaches her. ]

“Hahn, right?”

HAHN: That’s me.  Welcome to TA.
JENNI: Thanks.

[ They start walking & he gives her
a tour of the store. ]

HAHN: I actually started as a bagger.
So did our night manager, Ski.
JENNI: That’s cool.  This is my first
job ever.  I’m kind of nervous.
HAHN:  It was mine too.  So I understand.

But don’t worry.  It’s like an extended
family around here.

This is Kristyn, our floral manger.

JENNI: Hi, I’m Jenni.  

[ Kristyn greets her & Hahn bends
down to tell her something.  ]

KRISTYN: Sure, no problem.
HAHN: Thanks.  See ya.

Shall we continue?

[ Hahn & Jenni walk on. ]


SCENE 5:
At Ace & Karie’s. . .

[ Karie enters the empty rooms,
one by one and searching for
a hidden box.

Now in their bedroom, still with
nothing.  Karie sits down, attempting
to tap into her boyfriend’s smarts. ]

“Where could it be?

The recliner!”

[ Karie is sifting through the storage
expecting to find a jewelry box. 
Getting closer she notices, its filled
with information and notices from
the hospital. ]

[ Reading through Ace’s papers, Karie
has to sit down.  As she fights tears,
he comes through the door unaware. ]

ACE: Babe, what are you doing?

[ Karie stands up & Ace walks to her
but she backs away. ]

KARIE: How long have you been 
lying to me?

[She states, sifting through pages.]

 This is serious, Ace.

ACE: I’m sorry.  I just don’t want
anyone treating me like. 

I’m dying.

[ He sits down on the couch,
Karie stays standing. ]


SCENE 6:

[ After Jenni leaves, Hahn is passing
the front break room and hears Syria
and another male voice talking
back and forth.

With no one around, he leans toward
the door.  Listening. ]

DYMINIC: So, you have a good day dear?
SYRIA: Yeah, it’s fine.  I’m surprised
you came here on my break.
DYMINIC: About that.  I arranged you a
ride tonight.  I’m going out with my
boss. 
SYRIA: Again.  You would think you have
kissed his cufflinks enough.
DYMNIC: Yeah, not quite.  He’s relentless.

You done with the cell.  I gotta take off soon.

[ Suddenly the phone gets a text from an
unsaved number. ]

“Can’t wait for tomorrow night!.”

SYRIA: Okay slick.  Who is this?

[ She raises her voice and slides the phone
 to him ]

DYMINIC: Just my boss, Sear.
Relax.

[ Hahn bust through the door. ]


HAHN: Everything alright in here?

[ He lets out a big, uncomfortable
smile. ]


(Updated 10/24)

July 31, 2013

" Concrete Start (Part 2) "


SCENE 1:
Nighttime, Research Center.

[ Jeszyca wakes up suddenly from
what feels like a week-long nap.

Heading to the mirror, she checks
her forehead. ]

‘Nothing still.’


[ Now in the dark hall, she walks
toward the bathroom.  Hearing
loud voices, Jeszyca leans on
the door to listen. ]

FEMALE1: 250, 200…What should
we pay out this time?
FEMALE2: Who cares as long as
they get the same.  Can you believe
they increased it from $300 to 5?

[ She takes the notice off her desk
and slides it into the shredder. ]

FEMALE1: Yeah, too bad we’ll be
the only ones reaping the benefits.


Meanwhile, at The Telazon’s

[ Airynn opens his freezer & sees
Its full of ice cream, pizzas, and
various other frozen items. ]


SCENE 2:
In The Living Room. . .

[ Chais and Billy are sitting on the
couch tossing a football  back and
forth. ]

CHAIS: No more Connor MS!

[ He speaks through a mouthful
of mint chocolate chip. ]

BILLY:  Now you can spend the
summer following Jenni around
like you wanted.

[ Chais punches him in the arm.  ]

CHAIS: Yeah right dude.
Chais doesn’t chase.


Next morning, at Ace’s . . .

[ Ace is slowly walking through the
the living room, trying not to wake
anyone up. 

Finally inside his car, he checks his
voicemail. ]

‘Please come in to get your results.’

‘Message Erased.’


SCENE 3:
At Jeszyca & Larrie’s.

[ Jeszyca sits on the couch, staring at
the way too short check in her hand. ]

‘The nerve.’


[ Opening her laptop, she searches
her history to find the website where
she first saw the Research Ad.

Jeszyca is surprised to see a new
one had already been schedule for
the next day. ]

JESZYCA: We’ll see about that.

[ Her phone rings . . . ]

JESZYCA: Hey Larrie
LARRIE: I just got your text.  Wonder
how long they’ve been getting away
with this.
JESZYCA: I don’t know, but they won’t
be doing it any longer.
LARRIE: Don’t tell me you want to go
back there and investigate.  You know what
 happened the last time you stuck your nose in.

[ Jeszyca takes a second. ]

JESZYCA:  Yeah.  Maybe, you’re right.


SCENE 4:
Community Hospital, (Parking lot).

[ Ace is back in his car now.  His
appointment was done half an hour
ago, but still he sits frozen by what
the doctor just told him.

Dialing furiously, he waits for his
best friend to answer the line. ]

ACE: I’m so glad you answered.
MARK: Hey, what’s going on?
ACE: Look, I haven’t exactly been
honest with you or anyone in the
last few months…about what I’ve
been going through.

About a month ago, I noticed a
bump underneath my arm.
MARK: Okay, but you got it taken
care of, right?
ACE: No, not exactly.  I’ve just been
really caught up in the Salon.

But now it’s gotten worse.

MARK: How bad is it?

ACE: Mark, it’s serious.

The doctor told me today I
have a rare disease called
Castleman’s.


SCENE 5:
Late night, Outside the Research
Center.

[ A dark figure with a mask enters
the parking lot and slowly creeps
up to the side door of the building.

Looking around first before trying
to open the door. ]

‘Since when is this locked?’


[ Before getting an answer, a
series of bright lights are suddenly
shining onto the intruder. ]

“Its police! Put your hands in
the air.

And turn around slowly.”

[ The intruder obeys, waiting for
further instruction. ]

“Now remove the mask!”

[ The mask is removed, &
Jeszyca stands there in fear. ]


SCENE 6:
At Ace’s place.

[ Ace is wrapping up a phone
conversation with Mark. ]

ACE:  You promise to keep
your mouth closed.
MARK: I don’t agree with
what you’re doing, but at
least keep ME informed.

Alright, man?
ACE: Okay, I have to go.

[ Ace hangs up, & meets
Karie on top of their bed. ]

KARIE: How’s Mark?

ACE: He’s good.  Enjoying
his extended vacation.

[ Karie gets closer to him. ]

KARIE: And how are you?
ACE: Better now.  Much
better.

[ They roll over in the bed. ]


(Updated 10/24)



January 15, 2013

" It's All Me "


SCENE 1: Outside of class, at MSCC.

[ Marisa is standing in a corner near
her classroom. ]

“Hey, you hiding from someone?”

[ Startled, she turns around. ]

MARISA: Oh, hey. What would give
you that idea?

[ She laughs nervously and follows
her friend into class. ]

LORI: You’ve been acting strange
for the past two weeks. What’s
going on?
MARISA: Its nothing.  Have you
seen Airynn around since classes
started?
LORI: No, I haven’t.  Don’t tell me
you like him again.
MARISA: Of course not.  I was just
wondering. 

[ Lori gives her a look and sits down
at the table.  Marisa walks away,
looking down at her phone. ]

“Incoming Text: Airynn”

“Hey, sorry I haven’t gotten ahold of
you in a while.  Something came up
that night and I couldn’t make it to
the park.  We should talk. I’ll meet
you after class.”

[ Marisa sits down with a worried look on her face. ]

LORI: I knew something was wrong. That was
him harassing you, wasn’t it?
MARISA: Listen, Airynn’s not the problem.
I am.  And I have to leave.

[ She grabs her bag and exits. ]


SCENE 2: In the Salon office.

“Morning.  I’m ready to hear all
your fabulous ideas now.”

[ Karie smiles, walking up to Hithe. ]

HITHE: Oh hey. How are the appointments
looking for today?
KARIE: Better, I guess.  We’re set until
late afternoon.
HITHE: That’s good.  I have a plan for the
rest of the day too.

[ Hithe stands and begins walking around the room. ]

HITHE: I’m going out there to speak
with the entering customers.
KARIE: Out where? There’s no one around.
HITHE: Not over here.  In front of TA.

[ He opens the door to the office and steps out. ]

KARIE: Yeah. Well, don’t let Mark find out.
HITHE: Not a problem.  I rule at being sneaky. 


[ Outside of TA, Hithe sees a familiar face
coming toward him. ]

“Mrs. Monroe, you’re looking exquisite
today.  Is that a new dress?”

MRS. MONROE: Why yes it is.
Thank you, Hithe.
HITHE:  You’re very welcome.

[ He winks at her and comes closer. ]

 HITHE: You know what would go well
with that?  A nice trip into our salon.
Some new hair.   A romantic night.

 Surprise your husband, maybe? 


SCENE 3: At Marisa’s apartment.

[ Marisa comes in, shutting the door
and drops her stuff on the ground. ]

“I am truly loosing it!”


[ Picking up her phone she calls the
first person who comes to mind. ]

MARISA: Hey, what are you doing
tonight?

Really, that sounds interesting.
I’m serious.  You dress up for those
right?  I’ll get ready and meet you
around 7:30.
Cool.  See ya soon.


SCENE 4:  Hithe enters the Salon.

KARIE: Well, damn.  You have fun bothering
people all day?
HITHE: Bother my ass.  I got the salon
a whole slew of new clients.

Without even leaving the parking lot.  I’d
say I did an exceptional job. 

[ Turned to Karie, he doesn’t see
Mark walk in behind him. ]

KARIE: Someone came to congratulate you.

[ Hithe turns around fast. ]

MARK: Yeah.  Can I speak to you outside?


SCENE 5: Outside in a quiet parking lot.

[ Marisa gets out of her car in a long,
white dress and waits beside it.  Looking
at her phone, she sees the time change
to 7:30. ]


[ 5 minutes later, a truck pulls up close
and a familiar person walks toward
her. ]

MARISA: Thanks for meeting me.
JOH: No problem.  I’m surprised you
wanted to come out here.

I still remember you and Airynn’s
reaction when you first found out
I was a Witness. 
MARISA: Yeah, sorry about that.
The last thing I wanted was
to make you uncomfortable. 
Or rub anything in.
JOH: I know that and Airynn
was just being himself.
MARISA: You mean, an ass?

[ He laughs and she looks away. ]

MARISA: Sorry. Bad word choice.
JOH: It’s fine. I’m not your dad.
So, why sit through a meeting?

[ She stands up and faces him. ]

MARISA: I’m not sure.  I guess I’ve
just been feeling lost lately.  And I
thought that maybe this could be
what I need. 
JOH: Sure, that makes sense. But
what about this?

[ Joh picks Marisa up and sits her down
on the back on his truck.  Not giving her
a chance to speak, he kisses her until
she soon forgets what she was saying. ]


SCENE 6: In between TA and the Salon.

HITHE: First off, have you taken your meds
today?
MARK: Good one, Hithe.  But as much as
I’d like it to be, this isn’t a reaming.  I actually
wanted to tell you tomorrow will be the last
time we need you to manage the late
afternoon. 
HITHE: Thank god.

[ Hithe looks up to Mark staring at him. ]

HITHE: I mean, it was hard balancing both
places.  You know?
MARK: I know you would rather help with
the Salon.  No hard feelings.  By the looks
of things, Ace could use all the help he
can get. 
HITHE:  No.  The kid was just exhausted.  He’ll
be in tip top shape to return tomorrow. 

[ Marks smirks before walking away. ]

MARK: Whatever you say, man. 

[ He leaves and Karie comes outside. ]

HITHE: He’s so damn cocky.
KARIE: Who, Mark?
HITHE: Yeah, it’s like he has no
trust in me or Ace.  His supposed
best friend.
KARIE:  He’s the store.  We’re the Salon.
Why does his opinion matter?
HITHE: It just bothers me.  I’m gonna
show him though.  And anyone else
who dare doubted us. 

[ He walks away, leaving Karie
in shock. ]


(Updated 10/24)