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July 1, 2015

Eyes On You: Part Two


SCENE ONE:
TA, late the next afternoon.

[ Syria is finishing up her lunch
in the break room when Sandie
walks in. ]

SYRIA: Hey.  How's the day?

SANDIE: Coffee is my friend.
I have 30 minutes to sit down
before I teach an hour decorating
class.

[ She joins Syria at the table. ]

SYRIA: Ever since the bakery 
expanded it seems like they
have you doing a lot.  You sure
you are okay with it all?
SANDIE:  Yes I'm fine.  I figure
the more I can take on, the
faster I get the entrance &
the green light on whatever
else I need.  
SYRIA: That does makes sense.
And what about Broderick?

[ Sandie stops chewing on her
pretzel and looks right in
Syria's direction. ]

SANDIE: What about him?
SYRIA: I don't mean to but in
but you know what it looks like
to everyone who was there.  

[ Sandie's expression longs for
clarification. ]

SYRIA: Just be careful is all
I'll say.  Well I need to get
back on.  See ya soon.

[ She walks out & returns to
the self checkout counter.  Looking
toward the door, Syria slightly shivers
as an unsuspected person starts
walking quickly toward her. ]


SCENE TWO:
At Mark & Ski's, light is bouncing
through the living room windows.

[ Larrie rolls over, yawns, & stretches
his arms out.  Now noticing his sister is
beside him on the couch, watching TV. ]

LARRIE: How did you know I needed
a ride?

RIAH: Ski called me from your phone.

So how out of control did you get
last night, do I even wanna know?
LARRIE: Alright I admit.  I had a bit
too much.  Shouldn't have started
at the park, I guess.
RIAH: You drink every other weekend.
Never get sick though.  What else
have you been putting in your mouth?

[ Larrie takes a gulp of his water &
immediatly spits it out through his
growing laughter. ]

RIAH: I'm serious.

[ Jai comes down the steps & stops.
Staring at Riah until she notices
he's in her view. ]

JAI: Hey.  Morning sloppy do.

LARRIE: Funny.  This is my sister
Riah.  This is Jai.
RIAH: Hi.

[ Jai silently smiles at her,
not finding the words. ]


SCENE THREE:
TA, near self checkouts.

[ Syria keeps her distance as
Broderick approaches. ]

SYRIA: Can I ask what you're
doing here?  It couldn't be
that you were in the neigh-
borhood.

BRODERICK: Actually no.  I work
an early schedule and Sandie
said I could drop by any time.

Could you direct me to where
the bakery is?

[ Syria hesitantly points out the
way keeping her eye on him
as he leaves. 

Back at the bakery, Sandie is
shocked to see Broderick. ]

SANDIE: I didn't think you
would be so eager.  I mean this
is my first class.
BRODERICK: That's okay.  I'll just
stand in the back.  You'll hardly
even notice me.

[ Sandie gathers up her supplies
as Broderick comes over.  Taking
a fair amount, he pushes his help
onto her. ]

SANDIE: Thanks. 
BRODERICK: Don't mention it.

[ They continue on side by side. ]



[ Larrie is getting his hair cut by
Karie while talking with Ace. ]

LARRIE:  I told you.  I'm not just
showing off.  It does taste good
to me.

ACE: We all know you can be creepy
but this is just bizarre. Paper, really?
LARRIE: Thanks.  I asked you for
some real advice and this is,
all you come up with.

Sometimes it feels more like
a craving.
ACE: I've never heard of this.

KARIE: Instead of playing the
guessing game.  Why don't
you just go to the doctor?
LARRIE: I'm not sick.  That's why.

ACE: Whatever this is.  It's not
normal.  You don't want to
ignore it.  I know from experience.

LARRIE: Alright I get what you're
saying.  

[ Karie finshes wiping Larrie off
& removes the apron from around
him. ]

LARRIE: Now can I please get my
hair washed in peace.  

[ Larrie stands up heading to the back. ]


SCENE FIVE:
TA, in the bakery area.

[ Broderick and three other females
are waiting behind a table.  Sandie
comes up from the back and sits
a three layered, circular plain
cake in front of them. ]

BRODERICK: Nice.  Can't wait to
see the ending result.

[ Sandie quickly looks up. ]

SANDIE: No talking please.

Today I'm going to show 
you the different tools you
can use to assist in decoration.
You will each have a chance
to try them as well.

[ Meanwhile upstairs, Hahn &
Charles are eating in Mark's
office. ]

CHARLES: How often do you
come up here?
HAHN: Just every other hour
when Mark's not here.  To
check the cameras.

[ He sits down at the desk &
Charles stands over him. ]

CHARLES: Wait, who is that
guy in the bakery area?

[ Hahn zooms in for a closer
look. ]

HAHN: Someone moves fast.
CHARLES: I can't believe this.


SCENE SIX:
Outside a local clinic.

[ Larrie walks outside to see Jeszyca
& Sunshine pull up.  He sits in the
back. ]

JESZYCA: What did you find out?

LARRIE: They need to run more test
but the doctor said he's pretty
positive about the cravings.
JESZYCA: He did, why are you
having them then?
LARRIE: It has to do with low levels
of iron or nutrients in your body.
A lot of information, I'm sorry.
I could have a disorder called
pica or something like that.

SUNSHINE: What can you do?
LARRIE: Right now he told me
to adjust my diet.  I have another
appointment next week.  It doesn't
sound that serious really.

JESZYCA: It probably could be.
SUNSHINE: You need to take
care of yourself. 
LARRIE: Don't worry. I'm taking
this very seriously girls.  


SCENE SEVEN:
Back inside The Aisles.

[ A couple hours later, Charles
spots Broderick walking around
in the freezer section.

As he shuts a door, Charles is
standing right in front of him. ]

BRODERICK: You scared the crap
out of me.  What's up?

CHARLES: What's up is you seem to
have some sick curiosity toward
my fiance.
BRODERICK: It's not like that.
CHARLES: Well she's busy and
doesn't need you showing up
here all the time.

[ Broderick backs up. ]

BRODERICK: I get it.  Alright.
CHARLES: No. I don't think you
do.

[ Meanwhile up front, Syria is
helping an older woman use
the self check when she hears
some commotion. 

Reaching the freezer section,
she sees Charles standing
in front of a frozen door with
a construction sign on it
& Broderick trapped on
the inside. ]

SYRIA: Let him out now!

[ Charles moves, Broderick
comes out hurrying toward
the exit.  Syria is at a loss
for words. ]


HAVE YOU EVER HAD A

...... STRANGE CRAVING ?

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September 24, 2014

Catch Up With TA. . . . .SASCHA!


Sascha was introduced to the Salon in Season Four.  She is friends
with fellow Salon worker Karie.  This fall will dive deeper into
her home life and relationship with her overseas boyfriend 
Pierre (who has recently taken a job in Magic Springs).  

Amber's dream is more telling then she realizes:

Airynn gets a chance to step up at TA:

Ace needs one more thing for the Salon to be all set:

Stuu's life decision is questioned by his friends:

Ski is less than thrilled with Mark's dinner guest:

LeeVigh is forced to work with Stuu on a frat video:

Weis takes his reaction to news about Trey to an extreme:

Ace comes clean about his current situation:

Nothing like family drama:

Wild, wild, love:


F2A Premiere: Preview . . . . .

August 7, 2013

" Mind Fuck Rhyme "

SCENE 1:
Next morning, At TA. . .

[ Mark enters the store & is greeted
by the morning cashier. ]

“Hey, how was your vacation?”

MARK: Really good.
Thanks for asking. How
are things around here?
SYRIA: Oh, you know.
Same old, same old.

[ Suddenly Hahn approaches
Mark with a look of concern.
They walk into the assistant’s
office. ]

MARK: So, what’s up?
HAHN: Well, we lost $350 worth
of product the other day.  Some
was stolen, the rest left out to
melt all over the floor.

[ Mark doesn’t answer. ]

HAHN: Hey boss.  Did you hear me?
MARK: Yes sorry.  You reported it to
Jim right?
HAHN: Yeah, he wants you to run
the cameras and try and figure 
out what happened.
MARK: Alright, I will later. Thanks.


[ Hahn leaves.  Distracted, Mark
attempts to reach Ace but there’s
no response. ]


SCENE 2:
At a studio downtown.

[ Markis is on the mic & Trey
Is sitting, running the boards. ]

TREY: Nice bro.  So, you seen
Michelle around?
She hasn’t hit me up in awhile.
MARKIS: Naw man.  Tie said
she’s been MIA.  But don’t
worry, I’m sure she’ll make
it back around to you.

[ Trey laughs & Markis comes
over, sitting down. ]

MARKIS: You heard from Weis
since he went mad crazy on you?
TREY: Nope.

[ Trey looks away from him. ]

MARKIS: Can’t believe he basically
pistol whipped your ass. 
TREY: Shut up.  Anyway, you’re
wasting valuable time.  I suggest
you focus on your raps if we’re
ever gonna finish this mixtape.

MARKIS: Alright, alright.
I got you.

[ Trey sighs, turning the music
back up. . . ]


SCENE 3:
In Mark’s office.

[ Mark is trying to concentrate
on some paper work but all
he can think about is why Ace
isn’t returning his call.

Frustrated, he dials the number
to the Salon. ]

“TA Salon, how can I help you?”

MARK: Hey Hithe, is Acer there?
HITHE: Nope. He called off today.

MARK: Okay, thanks.

[ Hithe hangs up & Mark makes
another call. ]

MARK: Sorry for waking you,
I just really need to talk to
someone.
SKI: You’re fine.  What’s
going on?
MARK: It’s about Ace.  He’s
really sick and he wants to
keep it a secret. Karie doesn’t
even know.
SKI: Wow, how bad is it?
MARK: Very.  I feel like he’s slipping 
away and there’s nothing I can
do about it.


SCENE 4:
Back at the Studio. . .

[ Markis is wrapped up
& Trey is sitting in the
room alone. ]

“Ugh, why did Markis
have to mention him?”

[ Looking outside, he sees his
brother & Markis.  Now chilling
inside his car.

With no one around, he turns
the music back on & enters
the booth. ]

“You flew off the handle. 
Rage deep in your eyes.
But even as things sit,
I still consider you a prize.”

DEONDRE: Whoa, what was
that about? I’ve never seen
you try to spit.

[ Trey comes out. ]

TREY: Nothing, just messing
around.
DEONDRE: Listen, I have to
tell you something.

It’s about Michelle.


SCENE 5:
Back at TA. . .

 [ Mark is in his office, searching
through the security screens
from a couple days ago.

All of sudden he sees two
familiar young boys walk
right into the store. ]

MARK: Oh shit.

[ Minutes later, after he gets
off the phone with his boss
Jim, Hahn comes back ]

HAHN: Hey, did you figure
it out yet?
MARK: Yeah and you will
never guess who it was.
HAHN: Really, who?

MARK: My son Chais and his
friend Billy.  Thankfully Jim
doesn’t want to press charges.

But that boy better run when
I get home.
HAHN: At least now you know
who took your keys.

[ Hahn laughs. ]

MARK: Yup. I think I’m
gonna take off a little early.

I’ll see you tomorrow.


SCENE 6:
Outside the Studio.

[ Trey and his brother DeOndre
are smoking in his car. ]

TREY: It’s puff, puff pass.

You’re babysitting it.

[ DeOndre laughs & hands it
to him. ]

TREY: Now what did you want
to tell me, bro.
DEONDRE: There’s a rumor going
around town that Shell is
pregnant.
TREY: So? It could be anyone’s.
DEONDRE: Right but I stopped
fucking with her a long time
ago.
That leaves you. . .
TREY: And Markis?
DEONDRE: Right.

So what are you gonna do?

[ Trey looks down at his phone,
hiding the pic he is looking at. ]

TREY: Nothing.


(Updated 10/24)